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for When Stars Speak

by Klepto

person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww.....that was sooooo cute!!! I absolutely loved it!!! Just as intriguing as the first one...however, the second part wouldn't work...Strong as the Sun, I believe it was? Anyway, if you can fix that, great...if not...it was still wonderful!! Keep up the good work!!!
person ranoshi_ai
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
haha, i'm not laughing at the story, it's just i thought it was funny that i was so into the fic and following every word that i actually started tearing up and felt Naruto's pain. i was so happy that Sasuke stayed this timo hao happy for naruto, i wanna hug him too^___^ suu happy!!
person KARINA
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Its that it? No more? You have to put smore up!
And LONGER CHAPTERS!!!
But all in all it great I like it.
Hurry with more chapters.
I'll be waiting!^_^
person Naruke & Shikamaru
schedule October 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Naruke: Gwah!
Shikamaru: That's Narukian for 'Wow, that was so beautiful!'
person SpiritFighter
schedule October 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YAY! he stayed! i read all the rest of the companion fics but i thought i would just respond to the last one. its cause im lazy. my heart ached so bad for naruto that i almost felt like crying. i hate to say it but thats nothing new. if it involves naruto, im there. maybe you could continue? or is there not enough room left for a sequal to thiqualqual?
person Yue
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yaaaaaay! He stayed! He stayed! *Dances* That's right, Sasuke, you know you love him! *Grins*
person gelfling
schedule September 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oooohhh...pretty. Me likes. Very sweet and sharp, the very ESSENCE of Sasuke. Neato job.
person Creed
schedule September 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I didn't review the other companion fics, but I really liked this one. Naruto finally admits that he likes it. He asks Sasuke to stay, but has given up basically. And Sasuke does! *cheers* It's so much shorter than I recall the others being, but this part is terrific. I just want to run up and hug Naruto too! *breathes deeply* Yes, good fic. *nods* Now I'm gonna go read somemore Naruto fics. Hope there wil be more of this storyline!