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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke seems to be OOC, but sleeping Narutochan sound so kawaii!!!!!!!!!
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how come I have this vague idea that I have read this fic before? If so, did I review it before? If no, then I'm real sorry. If yes, I guess I won't mind doing this again, because this fic is kinda sweet and nice in a simple way. Well-done.
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, very nice. I've read better lemons, but I still like the writing. Good job.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a wonderful companion fic to your trilogy. i think this work pretty much gives the reader an inside view of what goes on in sasuke's head. my first impression of sasuke from the trilogy is how much of a prick he was! but with the publication of this piece we get to see how complicated relationships can be, how gestures and body language (and lack of communication) can skewer perceptions. like the title itself, this fic is beautiful!
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February 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away tears* Oh, that was so...so...so BEAUTIFUL!!! (No, that pun was not originally intended, and yes, it was sad) ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Its so beautiful!!!!! I crave for more..... but I don't want to force you...... So I beg for more......
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January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I rushed through all four of your Naruto fics as soon as I found them. I was absolutely thrilled when I saw them on your profile! I've just gotten into Naruto so I suppose I never paid attention to them before. ^^;;
How on Earth do you do it? You write some of the best danged lemons I've seen, and make them emotionally charged...without drowning them in corniness! I honestly can't think of anyone else who can truely do that, not the way you do. Your writing is so simple, too the point. The only others who can write smut, without killing it through overly-gushy characterization, write long, extensively detailed pieces. But despite the plain language, I've never hesitated to rank you as one of the high level fanfic writers. How the heck do you do it?!
How on Earth do you do it? You write some of the best danged lemons I've seen, and make them emotionally charged...without drowning them in corniness! I honestly can't think of anyone else who can truely do that, not the way you do. Your writing is so simple, too the point. The only others who can write smut, without killing it through overly-gushy characterization, write long, extensively detailed pieces. But despite the plain language, I've never hesitated to rank you as one of the high level fanfic writers. How the heck do you do it?!
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January 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHHAAAAAAT!! 0_O SASUKE FORCED HIMSELF ON NARUTO! @_@
WELL WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!? WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR GOD'S SAKE!
Is interesting REALLY interesting
WELL WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR?!? WRITE THE NEXT CHAPTER FOR GOD'S SAKE!
Is interesting REALLY interesting
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December 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING!!! :::lifts jaw off floor::: It was hot but so beautifully writen and... and... :::at a loss for words::: It really was Beautiful. ink ink that's the most approptiate title I've ever encountered before. Thanks for posting!
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October 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
great, in one word GREAT
are you going to make more?
i hope so :)
are you going to make more?
i hope so :)