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for I'm not alone

by Kinumi

person Hikaito Xicute
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I have nothing to question about you, but
Give the fans more , where dying to know what happens..!
person RikuNghts
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I cannot wait for you to update again! This is an AWESOME story! Naruto and Hinata are so cute! And Shino and Kiba together, even though it's not the main romance is GREAT!! T.T Please update soon!!! PLEASE!! ^_^
person Shadow\'s Light
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great addition keep writing to make the stroy better. And add somemore lemon. Maybe have Sakura stumble in on them. I don't know be creative
person Ugly
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
nothing bad with not liking Sasuke, theres enough fanfcis on em anyway. This is a Hinata and Naruti fic! And it rocks! I read the one shot a long while back and I love it, i'm so happy that you updated and I hopt you update again soo. All of the chapters were nice and sooo cool!

*thinks* I think i should update my chapter too, before ppl start to get the ide the their mind that i'm actually dead. lol LOVE YOUE CHAPTERS! I HOPE YOU UPDATE SOON!
person Songbird21
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT......was awsome ^_~\/ I am a total Naruto/Hinata shipper. It's so cool to see a well written story about them. And you did just fine for your first ever lemon. :)
person Songbird21
schedule January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am SO, loving this story! I can't wait to see what you do with it. ^_^\/
person ladyX
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is well written! Please update soon!

p.s. it's so hard to find a het fic in the Naruto universe, so please continue! :)
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish I had horrible writer block...a block of horrible writers. Then I'd just have stu stuff to read, like this. Needs more porn, though.
person HatakeKakashi
schedule January 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is an amazing fic!!!!Please keep updating it as much as you can, I am dieing to read more. I cant find enough Naruto fics with boy/girl couples and you picked basically my favorite one. I just love Hinata and the way you portray her is really good, please continue!
person ashez2ashes
schedule January 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uh oh...morning sickness eh? *cue omnious music* There better be no cliche 'hero dies right after he finds out his girlfriend's pregnant' ending! *looms in a scary way* LOL Um...anyways, yeah, this is probably the best Naruto lemon I've ever read. Keep up the good work.