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Um Regarding Alone? Dude morning after sex with breakfast is the best! Besides Kahashi may be happy for the runts, but he has a reputation to keep, so you kept them all in character.
Can't wait to read the rest!

really awesome story!!!!! writings good and plots and storyline so far r awesome!
will keep a eye out for more of ur writing
is hinata pregnant i know its probly to soon but she puked and thats i heard was a sign for it
plz plz plz update soon i prob wont be on this site much so if u do update email me plz!
anyway keep it up!!

Are you going to finish this story? i liked it alot.

good yay update

Awesome story, loved it. I dont know why you dont like the ending, I thought it was funny as hell. Thank you for doing a lemon that includes two of my favorite characters from Naruto. Would you by any chance think of doing another lemon with them both, and/or perphaps a romantic story about the two?

Thanx for your time, and keep up the kick ass work.

Kanaka (Anthony)

Nice story, however the words said by kakashi are a little less 'cool' than those you would expect. The story is generally good, but even if it is this type of fanfiction, it must be remembered that it is still fanfiction, and importance also lies in 'regular actions'

cool story, its going really well, update alredy its been forever

Oh! Yay another hinata fan who doesn't like sasuke!
*squee hugs*
I love Hinata and I love Naruto and I love your fic!
Um... I kinda skipped the 2 sex scenes cause.... I dunno. ^^;; I justfound this site looking for Naruto and Hinata because I love that pair... dun usually read lemmons...
But I read the beggining and the ending!
What do you mean no plot? *thwaks* Great plot very kawaii
I'll read the parts I skipped laters maybe...
Yeah it's good!

I'd have to say excellent job there. You've written an excellent story. However, I did feel a bit perturbed by your explanation to the last little question in chapter 3/4's end.
You can't deny the fact that they ARE 12 in the manga and show. (Well probably 13 or 14 years old considering about a year or two has passed since the anime started). I am also glad that you noted their real ages.
A lot of the authors of Naruto fanfiction (the ones I've read) like to say that naruto and the other genin are 16 never noting their real age. All in all I love your story :)

You're right. Sasuke doesn't deserve Sakura.

Please don't make Hinata pregnant..... Please....