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for My Immortal

by SaphireMMTPX

person KARINA
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
.....WOW...........ITS BEAUTIFUL.......REALLY BEAUTIFUL!!!
And what the hell are you thinking of probably not continuing this story.
Don't even DARE think about again!!!!
About the first person's point of view I think is SASUKE!!!
AM I RIGHT OR WRONG?!? PLEASE LET ME KNOW AT ramirez-f@sbcglobal.net
Well hope to see the next chapter!! ^_^
person Suzuko
schedule December 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to say Sasuke was talking about Naruto because they fight all the time and Naruto is really carefree kind uy wuy who actually has the tendency to change moods very quickly but if it isn't then I at least gave it my best shot of and if you do continue this I would really like to read more this is really really really really really gooooooooooooood. Oh and if it isn't them can you tell me who it is. Did I mention how much I really really really liked this story.
person P1
schedule December 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
It's so sad...
At the beginning I thought it might have been Naruto talking about Sasuke with the rival deals, but I can't even imagine Sasuke crying to Naruto so then Sasuke talking about Naruto. Naruto has the carefree nature and the blue eyes, in fact from what I can tell he's the only one with blue eyes. So then the whole 'rivals' thing was defnately Sasuke talking about Naruto.
This story's POV is from Sasuke!

Am I right, am I right?