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September 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Isn't Sasuke curious about how Naruto knew what to do or why he head lube in his drawer by the bed? Kind of funny, sly fox
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March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very hot
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sweet. Lord. You're awesome. I love it. I'm awestruck.
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August 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great.
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December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude that was hot but u should of had it so they said the word love or will u be my boyfriend but
great fic i loved it hope yah right more
great fic i loved it hope yah right more
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great ^^ I loved how absolutely cuuuute it was :)
~Lyndsay-Marie
~Lyndsay-Marie
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh I like! Very good!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, there, you really got Sasuke dead on, but Naruto's personality needs a little work... (Sound familliar?) Regaurdless, I still loved it, and I'm still your biggest fan! I love you, Mel.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for writing that! It was very well done - I don't think there was any mistakes in the first person or the tenses. Most other writers who attempt this seem to mess it up somewhere. It all flowed well too - not stilted or jumpy.
Did he heal the split lip? Was that what started it? You never said.
Thankyou again
Lydia
Did he heal the split lip? Was that what started it? You never said.
Thankyou again
Lydia
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well written--why don't you write a sequel to it ???