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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...Ho-ly SHIT!!! O.O That was...was.....just........ *bends over to retrieve her jaw from where it hit the floor* .....wow. Yeah....that was.... totally awesome...... ^^;; I loves the way you had it in Sasuke's POV........the way you portrayed his thoughts added alot to the story, and was very realistic, too....... Hell, the whole damn story rocked!!! Kewlness factor of about 11 (out of 10), and completely H-A-W-T hawt!!!! ^___~ Keep up the good work!!!!!
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August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now how did I miss this story? It's awesome, a PWP, in the true sense of the word, but somehow its more than that. It's smartly written, and your descriptions and comparisons are just amazing. Plus . . . hot. Very hot. You should write more. Really. As often as possible.
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July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh I wonder what's gonna happen when they wake up. Very nice.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, several months ago, I printed this out and used it as turn on material--and it's effects haven't diminished since the first time I've used it. And then I realized that I had totally forgotten to review your work, even while I was using it to feed my horny so many times. Well written, racey, and arousing this fanfiction is, and I thank you for writing it. *bows*
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ABSO-FUCKIN-LUTELY AMAZING! I just love how its got this Sasuke-ish seriousness to it. I LOVE how it ends. They're so in character that it's amazingly impossible. Keep up the good work.
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February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this...and i dont really know why..gues cause it can really turn people on...anyways i love it ^_^ and hope u do one on kaka/iru...^_^ anyways awsome ....scene ^_^
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January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Yum.
More!!!
Ja ne~
Yum.
More!!!
Ja ne~
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January 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh mah goodness. This is perfect. I love how Sasuke is just so /baffled/, how he describes naughty bits and naughty actions so clinically -- that's Sasuke for you. You've got the characterizations perfect. I'm so glad I'm not the only one who sees Naruto as seme! Thank you for writing -- I'm definitely off to go read your other stories.
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January 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This.. was so well written. I liked it and it made my heart race.
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December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
ooouuuuuu (gumping up and down) that was good nice and sweet.