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O.M.F.G!!!

When are you going to continue?!?!? X_X You made Naruto and Sasuke so In-Character-ly sexy. *_* It's so good! You have to continue... Pleasee. T_T

I love this fic.

Plain and simple.

And it needs to be updated. XD

I adore your writing style. It flows nicely from chapter to chapter... I didn't realize I was at the last chapter until I finished it and there were no more to go to. XD

And, I have to say, I really like this older Naruto. I can't put my finger on it, but... it just seems right to me. *shrugs*

Yeah... "I love this fic" pretty much summed it up, didnt it? XD

Anyways... please email me if you update this fic. ^.^

-Freakish Lemon

P.S. If you don't mind, I'd like to post a link to this fic in my "Yaoi News" on my live journal. [http://www.livejournal.com/users/freakishlemon] If there's a problem with this, feel free to attack me in a comment or an email or something. ^.^;

Yatta! This fiction is sooo good! There are too many fics with just one chapter, where they just jump to bed...no fun.....some foreplay is good! PLeeeease; another chapter!!!!!!!

Hey, this is great! I like the drama and the suspence. One thing though; the timeline. It just seems sorta off. I can see this happening with sasuke and naruto, but the part with sakura being pregnat... *hisses* It just doesn't work. I mean, she would've been married with lee at 16 or 15, and I 't t't think that'd work. It's like she gave up too fast. *shrugs* But whatever. Anyway, great fic, keep it coming, I'd love to see more!
~Love, Bealmira, horder of all things naruto.

this was really great. I love angst. XD and you wrote it so well. I hope you are still writing. I'd like to see more.

I LOVE THIS!! u rock! sasunaru kicks ass!! hehe im dying for the updates! >___<

whoa, this a one of those "you must continue!" fics. this plot is really interesting and having sasuke say sorry, that was the best that he actually apologized to naruto, the line of "can i taste you?" was gold especially with how naruto was trying to make sense of it and reacting the way he did. the only wary bit is naruto smoking, but since sasuke's drinking, that even things out so it's still cool^^ nice vision and writing, update soon^___^ you rock! wa...^^;;

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=D Lovin' it! Update soon!

This is great