rate_review Reviews

hey, make more! Soon!

Very good Story! I love it and I can' wait to read the next chapter.

hi! it's me again! I came back for the 2nd chapter and WOW! holy moly that was awesome!!! Either becuase I suck at articulation or this story is just so damn good so far that I can't seem to say how much I want to read more! so please do write the next chapter ASAP!

WOW!! Thats a good chapter, even if their was no loving in it.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
I hope it doesn't take you too long.
Until next chapter. ^_^

WHAT!! ONLY ONE CHAPTER!?
You can't do this to me! I demand you put another chapter!?
Its too good to leave it in one chapter for long! (starts whinning) ~_~
As you can tell I totally LOVE IT!!
And if you are telling me that this is your first fic about Naruto you could off fool me.
No REALLY!!
Well please hurry up with the next chapter soooon.
Well until next time ^_^

yay! is that a promise? [the smut-ish comment i mean] heh heh, anyway great story so far! but its so sad, poor naruto! oh well I have faith that there will always be happy endings! the scene switching was good, just the way you wrote made it easy to follow. although the italics are weird, at least I think...e ite it helps other people follow whats going on though, right? I hope you write more of this story soon! you write the characters very well and you said its yer 1st naruto fic! your such a talented writer!