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good grief what a mess. Those poor guys and damn those stupid fan girls. May they rot.

please continue I love sasu/kyubi paring its so hard to find and yours its really nice

I absolutely LOVE this story. It's one of my all time favorite Naruto fanfics. Even though the fic seems abandoned, I'm still curious as to why Anbu would let the swarm of antagonistic fangirls into the compound in the first place. It seems an unstable Kyuubi/Naruto + antagonism = Kahona explodes. Or something like that. So why allow the situation to escalate. And why wouldn't Sasuke, who knows the severity of the situtation, resort to violence to get them to back off (at least a visual demonstaration of violence). Even ninja fangirls are (supposedly) no match for Anbu. Hence my confusion. Still, it's a good catalyst. I love your diction, by the way. Wonderful narrative voice ^_^

God this story is so good. I don't know if you'll even get this reply but it's awesome. It's a shame you never finished it.

Ohhhh, lovely story. I wish you'd finished it, pity it appears abandoned. Anyhow, it's rare to find something that has the appearance of plot AND decent sex scenes. Splitting up the Kyuubi and Naruto like that, very good thinking, there's a ton of potential for character and story development from that idea alone. I like your take on Sasuke as a character, as well as how Naruto would be without the Kyuubi's influence. How should I say this, there's room for improvement, but you already appear to be lot more advanced than most fanfic authors I come across.

this is such a cool story. I really like it so please continue soon.

so im thinking that i've never read this chapter 7 before. and since i was going through all your fics at the moment, i might as well go through this one.

amazing writing as usual. the pacing, the annoying fangirls, the gut wrenching character pain i can just FEEEEL is coming on. (but maybe its because i'm listening to weezer as i read your fic)

i like!

Will you ever continue this. I love this story so much even after all this time.

OMG! OMG! Oh my fucking GOD!! I just pray that you get around to updating this story. So good so good! I want to know what happens next. I love love love your portrayal of Kyuubi. So great. I think you're doing a wonderful job and I loved the lemon and I want more! Ugh I'm going to be so disappointed if you don't update this....