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by Sugah

person viciouscallisto
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update update!! i like kyuubi...even if he did just hurt sasuke-kun and naruto. i wanna know what happens in the next chapter!! will naruto and sasuke-kun be okay? will the kyuubi regret his actions? will the 3 have hot sex again? i can't wait for kyuubi to make sasuke-kun unable to walk for days. i will like the idea of naruto's feelings for sasuke-kun affecting kyuubi. it makes sense that those two are intuned with each other. i think that naruto and sasuke-kun deserve a moment together. anywho, update soon 'cause i love the story and i wanna know what happens to my sasuke-kun and if naruto and kyuubi will ever be fixed. update!
person Neko-chan
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you leave us readers hanging on that cliff and i'll track you down and fucking FORCE you to keep writing! xD WHY DID YOU STOP?! It was getting good....<.<.......>.>...and personally....I hope Kyuubi DID kill a few girls.....xD And i hope Naruto's friend beat the shit out of the other 3...*glare* anyway good story, keep going or i'll find and kill you blah blah blah..xD typical fan stuff. bye!
person TinaEck@aol.com
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was just amazingly... wow o_O soo goooood!!! please right more!!!
person gp
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... and in an instant all went wrong... damn fan girls!!
oh well
CONTINUE PLZ! =D =D
person Gigi
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, God. This is the best story! I'm gonna fangirl squee all over you! Please update soon!
person Faery
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh...this is really really good. I love getting to see Kyuubi let loose. I do hope you continue this!
person april
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh i read your story so far up to chapter 7 i want more nyaaaaaaaaa please email me back and tell me if your ganna post more chapters soon!!
person Typhoon Jax
schedule April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~Lo~ve it~!
Very impressed, you gave me *many* delighted giggles at your characterizations and your deadpan narrative humor. And I must marry, I mean tell you you're keen, right now - The Talisman! A *total* favorite of mine for like eighteen *years* (dating self miserably, fine)! The running with the moon thing, I caught that even before you said it - how Kyuubi's so lycanthropic (is that the word?) when free to be him, loving that moon like it's some Goddess.. ahman. You, like, rule and things. *please*!!! !! ! Continue this story!
Such *talent*!
~*Typhoon Jax!*~
person iris
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wgad.. that was fantastic.. Man! you got me a new kink - kyubi/sasu.. does anybody writes this pairing at all.. Are you planning to update this story in the future? Please say yes. It's damn good..
person Shi Tiger
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update this one soon. Will Kyubi calm down enough to stay with the pair?