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by Sugah

person Natakamani
schedule January 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My gods in heaven... You must update this story!!!! Not many catch me like this one has, and now you have me all squirmy n stuff! Update pleasepleasepleaseplease! I'll give you a cookie! And mocha! And a kitten! Just update!

Much luv,
Natakamani
person lela951
schedule January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked ur story because it kept me in my toes through out most of it. I hate the fact that its a cliffhanger but i can understand that it was rather long. Please keep writing long long chapters =D and updates as soon as possible.
schedule December 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
argh, this is so engrossing...(i can't believe u wrote that word) anyway, update soon. pleaseeee...
person ksha2222
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update. This is one of the best Naruto fanfics that I've ever read!

Good luck!

Love
ksha2222
person akuma_river
schedule November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story. Love Kyuubi. The badass that he is. Keep up the excellent work. coolsa.
person bah© ?
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O__O Need next chapter!! That was BRILLIANT! I just love how you pulled off the confusion and fear... I loved it! You're so good at writing! **hugs like crazy** And I'm gushing... n__n

I wonder when you'll let out the next chapter? Soon, right? ^o^
person sailor comet
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that's a sexy fanfic.
(started reading chapter one before class and was very sad when i had to leave it.)

i'll be checking back here to see the next chapter. ^_^

~Sam
person sailor comet
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Right. And Kyubi is funny. ^_^
Especially when he says things like "Feed me, stupid one." and "It's merely demon stuff."

~Sam
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if you don't update soon I am going to bite you
person akima
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe you ended the chapter there. ARGH! Now, I want the one one even more. I'm really enjoying the story so far. The plot's believable and the sex is hot! fans self. And the sex is well integrated into the plot, instead of interrupting it. I agree with Kyuubi. Those rude, squealing fangirls must die! I like how you'eveleveloped Kyuubi. He's behaving like an demon should--mad, bad, and dangerous to know.