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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
update, finally! *bigfatgrin*
what can i say: i love it all. those sasuke-fangirls have formidable powers of annoyance. they're downright _scary_. and you say kyuubi's loss of control was unplanned? there have been hints of his character slowy losing control in previous parts, lending a frisson of dreadful anticipation to every interaction, so it's understandable/believable to myself as a reader. it's particularly sinister, because identifying kyubi as a fox/demon, one can justify violence, wildness, amorality, rage, cunning; so there's something inescapably jarring and sinister about this feral, inhuman creature trapped in a human body, bound to humans emotionally (and socially?) and all too unwillingly. i read each part, waiting for the other shoe to fall.
what can i say: i love it all. those sasuke-fangirls have formidable powers of annoyance. they're downright _scary_. and you say kyuubi's loss of control was unplanned? there have been hints of his character slowy losing control in previous parts, lending a frisson of dreadful anticipation to every interaction, so it's understandable/believable to myself as a reader. it's particularly sinister, because identifying kyubi as a fox/demon, one can justify violence, wildness, amorality, rage, cunning; so there's something inescapably jarring and sinister about this feral, inhuman creature trapped in a human body, bound to humans emotionally (and socially?) and all too unwillingly. i read each part, waiting for the other shoe to fall.
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH!!! NOOOO! Eveel cliffie. Bad Kyubi! Bad!
Well, you did say you would explain, and you did update, so I guess I'll have to deal. This fic is one of my favorites of all time, and even though this chapter was *extremely* evil of you, I still love you! Thanks so much for the update...I just hope the next one comes soon so I can stop this clenched up feeling in my gut. *_*
Well, you did say you would explain, and you did update, so I guess I'll have to deal. This fic is one of my favorites of all time, and even though this chapter was *extremely* evil of you, I still love you! Thanks so much for the update...I just hope the next one comes soon so I can stop this clenched up feeling in my gut. *_*
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October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Long chapters are good, nothing wrong with those! You must update again sooooon very very soon!
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August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love all your fics!!!! But where's the rest of this one? More please.
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August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::snickers:; Yeah, you go Naruto! Slam that door in peoples faces! Teach them for interupting you! ...and write more, soon, okay? This fic iscoolcool! *^_^*
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July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That last line was hilarious. I'm really starting to like Kyubi though it's kind of weird for Sasuke to be attracted more to the demon part of Naruto than to the human part. I suppose that's what makes this fic very interesting.
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whaha...I love how you write kyubi...so funny! and i'm so glad that you
are putting up more chapters! cause i really love this story...
bows.
are putting up more chapters! cause i really love this story...
bows.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, appsolutely brilliant!! It so suck get get interrupted, can't wait for more!!
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Been waiting eagerly for the nxt chapter to this. It's absolutely amazing, emotions portrayed so honestly and beautifully you can almost feel them. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah finally another chapter!! ^_^ and a VERY good one at that. I love how you have portrayed Kyubi. I also love the whole idea behind the story. It's very original and deliciously intresting. Oh please do update soon! >^_^< happy writing!