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by Sugah

person dapacster
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahahahahahahaha nice ending very funny please continue the story its a vea very good plot much better than some ive read so please continue the story!!!
person Twilight0713
schedule June 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM


x.x update so~on!! Must read more of uber hotness Sasuke and Kyubi! Naru-chan so cute **brain fizzles with white intensity** Making no sense Update soon!! ;-; need mores.
person hentaiyarou
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm, nice. I especially like the way you've been writing the kitsune...dangerous, off-balance, everything a n shn should be. One of the rare lemon fics where ple plot has me just as intrigued as the sex--and the sex feels like a valid part of it, not just a cheap excuse to see hot boys nekkid. Bravo, and please write more soon!
person Shadow-Storm
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great, original idea and nicely written scenes, i hope you update it soon!
person Anonymous
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, the only thing better then Sasuke having sex with naruto is Sasuke having sex with two narutos. Update soon, please
person crimson
schedule May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O_O SUPERB!! this is really good! this fic is worth my time! XD *is dying to wait for updates* >_< Can i make a fanart of this? i have a DA (conflictx.deviantart.com) account as well, i may post it there! >__< WEEEEEE XD
person justin
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
plz cont this story it is very good plz cont
person Moeko
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAH!! You made me feel so guilty for enjoying that. And I really did. When looking at the happenings from the innocent one's point of view, the image of what they're doing is all the more vivid. You're good. When can we have some more? Pretty Please?
person tess
schedule April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
updat update update! i shall chant it until you do! you must1 what dose it take to convince you writers to hurry?
person omizu69
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh please please please i want more!! this is a really good fic and i would like to see more ^__^