rate_review Reviews

Uuuuuggghh!! OH MY GOD!!! How could you Kakashi? How could you?
Aaaaawww man poor Iruka! ~_~
Even though Iruka is suffering I would realy appreciated if you could continue with the fic.
Please hurry with it.
Sayonara for now.
(Poor Iruka) ~_~

It's a really good story. Wait it's a great story, no grand, splendid, and stupendous. I just can't sum it up in a simple word. I really love KakashixIruka yaois, but this one a dark theme to it. It's so cool!!! Though it is kind of confusing using the same pronouns over again when the point of view switches. Maybe you could use a special mark or symbol to tell the readers who is talking/thinking. Or just write their name or nickname again. It doesn't hurt to do that. Less confusing to the readers. and your verb tense changes throughout the story in the flashback parts. Just wanted you to know. I hope you write the next chapter and put it up soon! This is too good to stop here!

Please continue... it's so... [I'm at lost for words].... I -need- to know what's next!

I love Kakashi/Iruka fics! It's my 2nd favorite pairing! Excellent descriptions too. It's definately keeping me interested, I look forward to reading the next chapter.

And I thought Kakashi meant Scarecrow?

I usually don't review fic on AFF but i have to say this one is one of the most oratorate/descriptive scene I have ever read. Very deep and emotional. Excellent work!

But i do have one negative response to something has has been bothering me the whole way threw... I believe Kakashi mean 'Scarecrow', not ' mosquito’.

The fic was very interestin. the best part, for me, when hen Iruka's friend found him incredible, i like it very much, so when the next comming? ^_^