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for An Urban Retreat

by talutah

person ~ME~
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*dies of awesome yumminess*
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another hot piece. That was sex as hell! Love Seme!Naruto and Uke!Sasuke, or should I say SasUKE
person jimmy
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was really cool. i like narsasu pairings very much,
and i must say this is one of the best i have read so far!
wonderful work!
person Tokitoh
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice fanfic. Very good I mean. Fabulous. Splendid. XD Anyways, I hope you get the idea. ^^
person Kate
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
An excellent short story! I like the fact that Naruto was in control and Sasuke admitted he needed to be loved. You did a wonderful job of combining love and tenderness with good down and dirty fucking. :)
person Demon
schedule March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*drools* wow
person blisblop ahhhh...you wrote that they..ahhh.tha...but then..tha..an...ah...so that means......oh god,do it again.
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
blisblop
person Anon
schedule December 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!!! Very cute -- keep up the good work!!!
person lo
schedule December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even with the few typo's that was so good. I think that was one of the best shower scenes I have ever read!!!. Your descriptive writing and you word choice really made the stroy come alive. THat was wonderful. Keep up the good work.

lo
person Naruke Uzumaki
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn...I need to take another cold shower...Keh. Second time in an hour...