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for An Urban Retreat

by talutah

person Jiro
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Naruto is seme!!! It's practically destined that Sasuke be uke, anyway. I mean, come on! SasUKE?!?! HAHA! Yummy! ^_^ Thanks for posting!

-Ja ne!
person baka neko
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*faints totally from a HUGE nosebleed*
omg this was soo well written
*claps*
person gelfling
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I thought the last two were excellent, but this one definitely takes the cake!
person Meg
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous shower sex! Sweet without being crazy sappy. LOVE seme Naruto. Hell yeah, girlie, you are a fabulous writer! :) Love all your works so far...more please!
person Random Kyuubi
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Random Kyuubi: BWAHAHAHAHHA!!!!!

Sasuke: W...what the hell was that?

Random Kyuubi: Just what it looks like, sas UKE!!!

Hao: Hmm, interesting. I never thought you would be the uke

Sasuke: *growls* shove it, manwhore!!

Random Kyuubi: .... hehe. Actually, i've never read a fanfic with Sasuke as the uke. Probably because i prefer Naruto to be the uke. Great job though!!

Sasuke: Whoever wrote this, i will hunt you down and kill you. i HAVE no manly pride lefty.
person FEdge
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww, the ending was so cute! great shower sex! *pervy grin*