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for Delerium

by SJK

person anonymous
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
listen CRACK WHORE OF FEED BACK i want more now
person BLISBLOP
schedule May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have been waiting sooo long for an update,yes.well what happens next?SEE I'm hooked,do not torment this poor fish.There are Itachis,Narutos and Kabutos .oh my!
person mE
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I beg you..continue!! I can't belive you haven't...arg..this fic sound so good..I'm gonna cry...
person jess
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great!
person yoroshiku
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... shit i got hooled again... u wouldn't mind updating would you? this is really nice, poor naru-chan though...
person silverfox
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
VERY WELL WRITEN KEEP GOING
UNTIL THE NEXT TIME BYE BYE!!!!
person Scottishfae
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story, it's so good! It was just my first time reading it today and I'm sad that I hadn't read it earlier when I passed by. But seriously, you must update! It's so awesome. And oh so suspenseful, what's up with Itachi?! Oh come on, don't keep us hanging! So far its really good and has tons and tons of potential with the plot line! Great job so far!

Until Next Time...

Scottishfae

person blisblop
schedule February 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhhhhh...daaaamn....new ideas...its not Itachi's fault(my personal opinion)I really want something exciting to read and there are only four chapters..screams in dispair...ya gotta up date..I needa fix..faints...please..i just read 50 plus chapters with less than a page of hotness and I'm in severe withdrawl(not your ault of course) but have pity!!!
person FlameArchanist
schedule September 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Continue. Oh and you might want to be more careful in your technical side. Absence...Patience that sort of thing it is distracting from the story when there are anomolies like that. Other than just the griping about the grammar I like the story and I hope you continue.
person sapphire
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
evil author very evil - cliffies - i hate them - love the story so more please