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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg u have GOT TO continue this
the story line is utterly fantastic
=3
and u write really well aside from the few spelling mistakes i picked up throughout
um just *one* thing that got on my nerves a lil...
i think its spelt Jiraiya ^^;;
sorry! im soo sorry im not trying to be mean *worry*
i'll shut up now
newayz update soon!
the story line is utterly fantastic
=3
and u write really well aside from the few spelling mistakes i picked up throughout
um just *one* thing that got on my nerves a lil...
i think its spelt Jiraiya ^^;;
sorry! im soo sorry im not trying to be mean *worry*
i'll shut up now
newayz update soon!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome story
what happened to naruto, how did he get hurt?
please update soon
*cheers for the author*
^^
what happened to naruto, how did he get hurt?
please update soon
*cheers for the author*
^^
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay!!! new chapter!! just a transitory chapter but still a new chapter!! update soon!! i wanna see how sasuke and naruto interact!!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your going to continue soon right? the suspense is killing me...
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay all I have to say is...This fic is So totally cool! please update soon! Can't wait to find out what happened to Naruto! and how he got back and where he haen len love the leesakura pairing btw and sasunaru is good too!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whee!! this chapter is as fantastic as the last! quickly update, I must know what happens when Naruto wakes up.
p.s. cliff hangers are evil, die die die evil cliff hanger!!!!
p.s. cliff hangers are evil, die die die evil cliff hanger!!!!
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sarah: "You owe me donuts for this one girl."
Blair: I don't owe you shit, let alone donuts. Are you threatening me?!
Sarah: With Cthulhu standing menacinly behind me...
Sigh, I guess I should congraduate you on another completed chapter. And NO YOU IDIOT I didn't scare your other readers, they probably don't even read these posts. We are the only two anal-retentive bastards here. God the things I have to go through.
Miyoko was great--the nurse isn't like her at all (I expected a lot worse). Characterizations are excellent. Great chapter length; I know you hate writing this much at a time but it is a lot better than those short chapters that don't go anywhere. But of course, you know what my favorite part of your fic is-- the ending dialogues. How long is this fic going to be?
Blair: I don't owe you shit, let alone donuts. Are you threatening me?!
Sarah: With Cthulhu standing menacinly behind me...
Sigh, I guess I should congraduate you on another completed chapter. And NO YOU IDIOT I didn't scare your other readers, they probably don't even read these posts. We are the only two anal-retentive bastards here. God the things I have to go through.
Miyoko was great--the nurse isn't like her at all (I expected a lot worse). Characterizations are excellent. Great chapter length; I know you hate writing this much at a time but it is a lot better than those short chapters that don't go anywhere. But of course, you know what my favorite part of your fic is-- the ending dialogues. How long is this fic going to be?
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February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah
you updated!!
can't wait to see what happened to ANruto and all
and Sasuke must be so happy
at last he found Naruto
update soon ne????
you updated!!
can't wait to see what happened to ANruto and all
and Sasuke must be so happy
at last he found Naruto
update soon ne????
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February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was really good, can you PLEASE write more? PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE???!!!!!
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February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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DAMN that was good! you better be updating soon. don't be one of those ars trs that updates every forever and a day. and don't discontinue or I'll devote my life to becoming a hacker so I can hunt you down ou cou can tell me the rest of the story.
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DAMN that was good! you better be updating soon. don't be one of those ars trs that updates every forever and a day. and don't discontinue or I'll devote my life to becoming a hacker so I can hunt you down ou cou can tell me the rest of the story.