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November 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm usually not one to leave reviews, but this fic really screamed out to me, and I hope you can read this. I want to compliment and congradulate you on your writing skills and for the way you portrayed this fic. Most rape fics these days always go somewhere along the lines of the victim being raped, enjoying it, and falling madly in love with their captor, but this one really sticks out of the crowd and shows what a real rape fic should be. ;) (Hm, I sound like a sadist, don't I? XD)
I haven't delved too much into the "Naruto" fandom of fanfics anywhere to give a true opinion on this, but the way you portrayed Sasuke made him realistic and made you just want to sympathize him. He's still the slightly arrogant rival of Naruto with enough dark/mysterious aura surrounding him, but at the end where you made him get up and go save Naruto shows a side of Sasuke that people normally forget -- Sasuke's isolated and cold when he needs to be, but undereath it, he's still human. Itachi was twisted and sick, but who says I can't obsess over that? ^_~
Ah well, I think I've babbled long enough. Like I said, I loved your fic -- truly twisted. Twisted, but fun to read. =D
I haven't delved too much into the "Naruto" fandom of fanfics anywhere to give a true opinion on this, but the way you portrayed Sasuke made him realistic and made you just want to sympathize him. He's still the slightly arrogant rival of Naruto with enough dark/mysterious aura surrounding him, but at the end where you made him get up and go save Naruto shows a side of Sasuke that people normally forget -- Sasuke's isolated and cold when he needs to be, but undereath it, he's still human. Itachi was twisted and sick, but who says I can't obsess over that? ^_~
Ah well, I think I've babbled long enough. Like I said, I loved your fic -- truly twisted. Twisted, but fun to read. =D
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yanno? Something a/b Sasuke's POV gives this fic like... an almost funny undertone
o_O
yah, I'm a sadist
anyways, this was awsum, it's so tru to the characters
o_O
yah, I'm a sadist
anyways, this was awsum, it's so tru to the characters
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July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. All I can say is.. just.. wow.
I've written an ItaSasu myself, but it was nothing compared to this. Sasuke's emotions, his anger and frustration are all written out beautifully, even despite the dark and hateful nature of this fic. Itachi is characterized well, sick, twisted, and utterly apathetic to those around him.
Keep up the good work. ^^
I've written an ItaSasu myself, but it was nothing compared to this. Sasuke's emotions, his anger and frustration are all written out beautifully, even despite the dark and hateful nature of this fic. Itachi is characterized well, sick, twisted, and utterly apathetic to those around him.
Keep up the good work. ^^
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May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, how should I put it... You made me love the pairing now. And I was JUST getting to Kakashi/Sasuke doujinshi... *sigh*
This fic... it's breathtaking. I read through it very quickly at first('cause, you know, I wasn't a fan of the pairing back then yet!), then re-read it, and re-read it again. The language. Is. Amazing. I'm not a native English-speaker, and here I was sitting, automatically translating it in my head, and it just made perfect sense (I mean your language structure). Only a couple of times it looked like the expressions you've chosen were a little, LITTLE off (hell, come shoot that part of me that dares to actually pick on this beautiful fanfic, it's "pro"professional philological always-bitching" side, don't mind it ;))).
I won't be flattering much saying you're probably the only person out there who wrote a Itachi/Sasuke piece that's actually... good. Strong on logic side, characters being in their, err, characters and perfect detailed surrounding that makes the story so full and filled. And totally the first fanfiction writer on my practice, who writes fanfics dealing with rape, and these fanfics don't make you go "Huh? Home come they're cuddling and "bathing in the aftermath glow of their lovemaking"???"
Well, in the end, my fangirlish side’s screaming for some screen time. :)) Damn, that was SEXY!!! Yummy, tasty, ever so... so... hot. Waaahhh... Drools... OK, now I probably just HAVE TO draw an Itachi/Sasuke pic... You’ll be blamed for it, so be prepared. ^_^
This fic... it's breathtaking. I read through it very quickly at first('cause, you know, I wasn't a fan of the pairing back then yet!), then re-read it, and re-read it again. The language. Is. Amazing. I'm not a native English-speaker, and here I was sitting, automatically translating it in my head, and it just made perfect sense (I mean your language structure). Only a couple of times it looked like the expressions you've chosen were a little, LITTLE off (hell, come shoot that part of me that dares to actually pick on this beautiful fanfic, it's "pro"professional philological always-bitching" side, don't mind it ;))).
I won't be flattering much saying you're probably the only person out there who wrote a Itachi/Sasuke piece that's actually... good. Strong on logic side, characters being in their, err, characters and perfect detailed surrounding that makes the story so full and filled. And totally the first fanfiction writer on my practice, who writes fanfics dealing with rape, and these fanfics don't make you go "Huh? Home come they're cuddling and "bathing in the aftermath glow of their lovemaking"???"
Well, in the end, my fangirlish side’s screaming for some screen time. :)) Damn, that was SEXY!!! Yummy, tasty, ever so... so... hot. Waaahhh... Drools... OK, now I probably just HAVE TO draw an Itachi/Sasuke pic... You’ll be blamed for it, so be prepared. ^_^
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
your site is awesome...u seem to be the only itachi/sasuke writer of *this* kind...congrats!!!!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holycrap that was F@#$! good! Keep up the good work!