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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person dancing-neko-chan
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO GOOD! I was hoping that it would be Neji that would get some of Naru-chan. I cant wait for the next update. But what gonna happen when Gaara and Sasuke find out...and what about Itachi? (that was Itachi right? you know, the guy that kissed naru-chan...*smacks forhead* of coursu knu know! your'e the author.silly me. :P)

Anyway, really nice chapter. I'll be looking foward to the next one! So....until then.....this is d-n-c signing out.

P.S. Thanks for the shout out! ^____^
person tokiya
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! So cool!! Neji!! I love NejixNaru ^^ Mm..my doujin will probably took a long time because i really busy at school and there's a bunch of work i need to finish.Plus I caught a flu -_- So, once more, sorry for my slack and keep your good work^^ I'll send you a new sketch as soon as it finished
person Kashshaptu
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Iloved it!!^_^ aaaaah too bad it's not sasunaru, but I'm patient, I know it will come (it will right?? hehe) keep on writing and updating!!!! *hands out cookie!*
person Crizzy
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SASUKE YOU ARE AN IDIOTTTTTT!!!! DIEEE!! *takes out gun and shoots him x500*
DIE! *kills revieves, then kills again, repeat this for 600 times*
omg this chapter is so hot though. GO NEJI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! and one more thing, I just HAVE to say this to sasuke... DAMN YOU SASUKE! THIS IS WHAT YOU DESERVEEEEE!!!! please dont mind my language. lmao.
I LOVE IT! cooooooontinue!
person kayoko
schedule September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter..
itanaru sexiness!!! XD but..how could naruto know itachi's name in his dream? =/ does it have to do with the whole past life thing?

what else...i can't believe sasuke..is being such a bum =/ *glares at sakura*

*stabs sakura to a horrible death*

oh....mmm..lemon..it was great ^_^

this chapter was very enjoyable, thank you for writing. i look forward to future chapters.
person lalala
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke you ass! Go back and apologize to Naruto-chan!
person ayonoi
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PUMPS FIST INTO AIR *YES!* and does a happy dance. That's right, Naruto and Neji are together!get get about Sasuke Naruto, Neji is the only thing you need. Ahahahahahaha. I am super happy, you just made my evening *GLOMPS*

And yes, I will accept your yaoi cookies 'cause they are NejixNaru flavored. Happiness...
person coriander
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg I loved this chapter!!! Loved loved loved. Sasuke is such an ass sometimes.. *sigh* omg I didn't realize how much I wanted Naruto and Neji to get it on until they did. That was hot! Anyway, can't wait for the new chapter. Update soon!!!!
person Jiro
schedule September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaara is so CUTE!!!! He stayed with Naruto the whole time he was sick and blushes at everything he does! Plus he remebered Naruto's birthday! *huggles the widdle psycho* I am SO for Gaara getting some action! With that said... Yay for Naruto & NEji! (hey! I like them ALL! I can't help it) It's a little shadey that he changes his mind about screwing Naruto for no damn reason, especaially when Naruto *JUST* broke up with Sasukeew hew hours earlier. Was he planning screwing him even *before* they broke up? And BAD SASUKE for dumping Naruto so coldly! Especially on his birthday (even if he didn't know about it). Although, Naruto was kind of acting like a whore. I don't care what he says, he LET Itachi kiss him. And that is BAD. VERY, VERY *BAD*!!! But he did treat Naruto like shit... I dunno. Anyway, I'm definitely curious about what's gonna happen next. Is Neji gonna want it to be a one night stand- no strings attatched type deal, or what? And poor Gaara, how will he react? I don't care about Sasuke... he doesn't have a right to be mad about it at all... stoopid bastard. Anyway, thanks for updating! I was starting to think you had died... Can't wait to read more!!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!
person Crizzy
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Omg, i just love this story tooooooo ! Pl! Please update! ID LOVE TO SEE SASKUE AND NARUTO TOGETHER FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOT!!!! Though I must say that your writing style is quite remarkable, and certainly an entertainment to enjoy and read. You've made my day! =) ...er... I guess I'm saything this to both of the writers, lol, Please continue! I'm waiting for more!