rate_review Reviews

Hey! It's Melissa. I fighting to get the scanner. Loved the chapter. So cute. Gaara is so sweet. Catching Naruto like a knight in shinning armor. YAY LEMON! Please let it be Sasuke. No one else...yet. First with Sasu, then Neji, then Gaara, then ME! Just kidding Can't wait til next time.

uber happiness, a new chapter! This is so awesome, I missed this fic so much, it is one of my favorites. Poor Naruto, he is working himself to the bone. I like the flirting with Neji...and I like to see Sasuke jealous. It makes me wonder if he is aware that Neji has an eye on our little kit *evil thought*. Wow, Sasuke surprises me, I didn't think he was going to ask that. I can't wait for the next episode. I was hoping that Neji be Naruto's first but we still have to see that lemon, don't we. *go Neji!, hopefully Sasuke won't beat you!*

*HUGSSSSS*

I just luvluvluv it....^_^....what more is it to be said? Sure, I would like to punish Sasuke somehow, him being utterly dense, but I willbe grateful for a little snogging inbetween him and Naruto..OMG! You may also, if you please, set up Neiji on Narutos "to-be-snogged-thoroughly" list^_^ *snicker*..... I vuw the personalities; guess you must have used lots of time in order to manage them into behaving properly...And I love the way this story really has a plot, not just yummy yaoi!!!! I luv the story, a rea really love Evanescense, so THANK U for bringing up their name!! Anyway; luvluvluv your fic! PLEASE !!another chap! NOW!!!!

MUAHAHAHAHA! Your back! I missed ye!! *falls on the floor at your feet*

EEK! Sasuke finally gave into his feelings! *jigs* AND there is going to be a lemon next chapter *___* I'm so hyped up now! I wuv you <3

lemony goodness! update soon again ^^

Yay, a new chapter! =D Uwa, a lemon is coming? Hurrah, hurrah! *dances* I can't wait for the next chapter. =D Keep up the great-tastic work. ^^

You just made my friggin' day... seriously. I don't care how pathetic that sounds, it's true!

(T~T) ::tears of fangirl joy::

Thank you soooo much.

YAY!!! (DOES A HAPPY DANCE AND GIVES YOU COOKIES) AN UPDATE!! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

I WAS STARTING TO BELIEVE THAT YOU FORGOT ABOUT THIS STORY AND WAS GOING TO LEAVE POOR NARUTO HANGING. I'VE BEEN READING THIS STORY SINCE IT WAS FIRST PUT ON THE SITE. GLAD TO SEE THAT YOU STILL HAVE SOME THINGS IN STORE FOR OUR FAVORITE BOY. (HUGGLES HER NARUTO PLUSHIE) I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!

(STILL DANCING) NARUTO'S GONNA GET SOME BOOTY!!! DEMO, WHO'S HE GONNA LOSE HIS VIRGINITY TO, HUH? PERSONALLY, I'M VOTING FOR-

SASUKE: YOU BETTER BE VOTING FOR ME...
DNC: ACTUALLY I WAS GONNA SAY-
SASUKE: (GLARES AT DNC) YOU ARE GOING TO SAY ME.
DNC: ON SECOND THOUGHT, I REALLY DONT CARE WHO GETS NARUTO AS LONG AS HE'S HAPPY. SO THERE! (STICKS HER TONGUE OUT AT SASUKE)
SASUKE: (EYE TWITCHES)
DNC: (SWEATDROPS) UH-OH! I THINK I TICKED HIM OFF. SO I'M GONNA RUN AWAY NOW. BAI!
SASUKE: BAKA...

I just love this fiction. I had to go back and read it all over again. While reading the "Behind Blue Eyes" part I found myself getting a taf teary eyed because it does remind alot of what Naruto goes thru. Also your story inspired me to draw. I just got dne with Naruto and am starting with Sasuke. Wtish I could show ya but my dad won't let me get a scanner. *sob* He's so mean. Well I can't wait to read the next chapter both here and on fanfiction.

Hi. I found this through the link you posted on the naruto yaoi community on lj, and I really hope you continue this :3 it's -really- good *t'st's one of the few fics I've read in a long time that I've been so wrapped up in :3 great characterization, character interactions, storyline, and just... very good overall :3 also, the sensual and emotional parts are also quite nice ^_^ I look forward to the smuttier parts, but they are very secondary. Good luck ^_^ and wonderful job.