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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person Rune
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAWD! YOu always make them sound so DAMN SEXAH! *melts*
The clothes and the way they act PHWEEEEE~ *on cloud 9*
I have scarrie nosebleeds when i read your ficcie! *dances*
*HUGGLES* Im so glad you Updated! I thought you had
disappeared T.T But WElcome BACK!!!!
SasuNaru action you say? YATTA! *crosses fingers*
Let it be SASU-CHAN! =P
person P1
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Two to three chappies!! Too long... *sniff*

the outfit sounds cool though, wish I had a piccI suI suck at drawing outfits... and actually at drawing anything but whatever. Wonder what Hikou meant by Kabuto changing Naru-chan, does it come up later?

Some of these guys need to get together!!
It's so frustrating seeing all the little hints and not getting a product. I hold you to your promise. The fifteenth chappie, at the most, must have a lemon. You promised!!

And as a final word. UPDATE! UPDATE!! UPDATE!!! UPDATE!!!! UPDATE!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Please?
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh this is so good, I'm so glad you've updated!! Who was it that tucked Naru-chan into bed, I can't wait to see!! (Please can it be Sasuke, not that I'll be terribly upset if it isn't :P)
person Anon
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I've read all 12 chapters at once and now feeling slightly dizzy... This really got me glued to the screen, particularly the bits and pieces of SasuNaru that got me squealing and desperate for more. ^^= Please _do_ write more, and fast! I'm definitely in love. Loved the way how you wrote Naruto, like a little uke. =D The part how Naruto had 'acted\ bed bed with Sasuke, and where he confessed caught me almost screaming, "AWWWWW!" So whatever you do, _please_ put more SasuNaru, and pair them up? Onegai...? I just hope Sasuke can actually respond to Naruto's love instead of just staring, glaring... yadda. ^^; Arigatou~ you've made my life suddenly more interesting by writing this. <3
person dragonfly
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, when can Sasuke really tell Naruto, "You're not my type, but I'm still attracted to you." or something like that? I'm dyinr mor more. x__x; I'm glad I found this story, I've even dreamed about it. @.@; Keep writing, you're just wonderful. *hugs*
person Anael Razualle
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! Gaara is part of their band already!!!! Does that mean more gaara/naruto?
person Kashshaptu (too lazy to sign in)
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaah, I wanna know!!! hehehe, I'm sooo excited!! I just love the cute fluffy sasunaru in it, with the hand in hand stuff^_^ aaaaaw, aaaaah I gotta stop squeeling but I can't! please update soon while I'll try to calm myself down^_~
person ochiba
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I totally ::heart:: this fic.
person SDI Hypervelyݨ y
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! sorry I took so long to review, keep it up!
person SpiritFighter
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sobs happily* YEEEEEESSS!!!! another chapter! I'm so happy!!! *sobs harder* you must update sooner. Damn your evil work!!! *tries to convince god to smite the evil workplace* Ooh! They finally got signed! *jumps up and down and giggles* hmmmm. I wonder who Naru-chan is clinging to? *hopes it's Sasuke* I don't think Sasuke would LET anyone else take him home anyways. He seems a LITTLE protective.(insert sarcasm here) ^_^ oh please do update soon! *begins the tedious wait for the next chapter*