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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person KARINA
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! this is the best and coolest Naruto story I ever read.
I LOVE IT! ^_^
Please hurry with the next chapter, I can hardly wait.
OOOOOOHH! ^_^ It's sooo amaizing!
I can't say anything else because its sooo hard to describe, well the only word that comes to mind is coll, amaizing, wonderfull, and well I LOVE THE FIC! ^_^ (more than one word, huh?)
Well hope to read the next chapter soon.
Once again love your fic. Can't get enought of it. ^_^
person Yuka
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOh. sexy. We've got battle of the bands over here... o.O I thought it was only in Edinburgh schools, but I guess it must be world-wide.
person Yuka
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! WRITE MORE SOON! ^^!!
person Shez
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, awesome, awesome! I love it all, but I can't picture Naruto as a goth. When I try to, the image he tried to use as his ninja profile image thing in like episode 10 ometomething keeps popping into my mind. Y'know, that one where he painted his face with stripes? XDD Anyhoo, continue onegai! Sugee, datte ba yo!
person Anon
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did--I was thinking it might be good to give credit to the Smashing Pumpkins, just in case someone decides to be anal and report it. ^^; That said, I'm really enjoying this fic! I like that you're developing the character relationships before they have (really hottt) sex. XD Just out of curiosity--what bands do you imagine Naruto etc. sounding like? You've used a SP song--does that mean you think Naruouldould sing like Billy Corgan? I could dig that, heh.
person Jin
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I did--I was thinking it might be good to give credit to the Smashing Pumpkins, just in case someone decides to be anal and report it. ^^; That said, I'm really enjoying this fic! I like that you're developing the character relationships before they have (really hottt) sex. XD Just out of curiosity--what bands do you imagine Naruto etc. sounding like? You've used a SP song--does that mean you think Naruto would sing like Billy Corgan? I could dig that, heh.
person dragonkitty
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay Gaaras coming. Poor Naruto I feel bad for him dealing with fake boyfriend Sasuke, and non wanting to be boyfriend Neji.
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOH! Loved it! And I SWEAR I've heard that song!! ::slams head into wall:: WHERE?! It's so familiar!! ::thinks really hard:: I KNOW I know it from somewhere.... grrrr.....
person FeatheredEdge
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey!...um, ignore that empty reveiw! I' I'm sucha klutz, hit the enter key 'stead of the tab! sorry!
ok, so I admit I saw this story earlier, but I didn't read coz the summary just didn't sound appealing to me. So this time I came across it & decided why not give it a chance? & damn I glad I did! this is a good story. So AU and OOC its almost not Naruto anymore, 'cept for all the story references n' stuff [know what I mean right?]. damn, its good! maybe you shoulda just made it a original fic since its so creative! anyway, I really like it. and hells yeah that's a damn good song! Smashing pumpkins \/\/007! ..ah, I think the song's called zero. But yeah, good song! Please write a new chpater soon!
person Suukou
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasps and clutchearteart*

Dude. Dominant!Neji rules my world. If you're going to make this a 'verse you write in.... please write me an interlude with Neji/Naruto... he's so sexy. I'll write you a pairing of your choice if you wanna do a fic exchange. I just adore the way you write him. And in my mind... he's barely an AU character, because I just feel him, you know?

And I absolutely love Sasuke and Naruto's conversations right after Neji leaves.

You're hitting one of my top kinks... seme/uke... *purrs happily*