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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person Elesiel
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The way you use lyrics is just mind blowing!!! I read and re-read the story and every time lyrics blinds so well with the mood of the story! I even started to see the songs themselves differently, like when you hear the song or when you see the video of it the way you take it in changes. Not to mention that the story itself is really good and I am very impatient for the next parts ^__^
person Lady of Gryffindor
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, how hott! ^___^ I was getting worried you wouldn't update this anymore! Thank god you did! Keep up the great work!
person The Empress
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright! Another chappie! I thought Itachi was gonna.....nevermind. Anyways, Gaara and Naruto are gonna do some serious making out somewhere, and I can't wait. *giant smile* I can't wait for the next chapter.=) I'm gonna have to wait anyway though. =p hee hee
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! YOU'RE BACK!!! *huggles you then looks at you with tears in her eyes* i always knew you would return to us someday. glad to have you back and don't worry. i'm sure they'll forgive ya for the lateness. i know i do. anyway, nice to see that you haven't lost your touch. so naruto and everybody else is in on itachi's plan. it's sweet seeing how far naruto will go for sasuke's happiness. i like the way you had itachi state the whole "i killed my family for my brother" thing. it shows that he does have a heart and harbours some feelings for his brother in a weird but ok way. i, also, liked the way naruto was influenced by itachi or should i say by itachi's actions *smirk* shit, if i saw itachi shirtless, wearing some sexy glasses and pinstripe pants, not to mention whispering the most erotic rock song i've ever heard, in my ear, i'd be influenced too...... to jump him just like kisame did. which was very hot by the way. i usually don't care for the big blue guy but your description of him made sound uber hot! but not as hot as the gaaraxnaruto at the end. it's about time that boy got some loving (and hopefully, some booty in the near future as well :hint hint:) i am very much looking foward to your next update. so until next time, ja! ^____^

*waves banner saying " Marked By Jutsu reader 4 eva!!"*
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
um,i forgot to ask this earlier. would you mind telling us what's going on with "A Scrap of Humanity"? i would like to know if it's been discontinued or just on the back burner for the moment. sorry if i sound pushy.
person Kenz
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok can someone explain what is Itachi's plan!?
and is Naruto ruining the plan becuase he is take Gaara's friend ship a bit far????
person moonprincess90
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hay i don't care how late you post. I'll always read it. Thanks for anther great chpater ^-^ oh, using closer was a great song for itachi. god that man is the sex!!!!
person Jem
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, great fic. I want a kyuubi plushie too! :D I love the way you've kept each characters personality as much as possible. And massages from neji... i wish!
person Neko-chan
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ima quickly quote a review reply you made..."
Devious Lil Devil- Thanks for the compliments. And wow I didn't notice til you pointed it out that the last chapter had no sasu-bitching. I can't tell you about what Itachi desires. Hi~mi~tsu ^_~" xD I think we all know what he wants, 1) power and lots of it 2)most likely for his "higher ups" to suffer greatly and 3) naruto's tight little but.xD But i think i see how you're going to have Itachi try and tear away naruto seeing as he is basically the heart of the band. He's probably gonna try to tear apart the band and have Naru. work with him on music or something to make his already worl reknown staust bigger.-_-...Although i do agree that he seems to be better than just simple rape...I think he likes manipulating people to much to force soomeone into things...I like this version of Itachi better...xD And when i read the dream i was like "which chapter does he show up?" rotflmao. I think it's awsome how you played the reincarnation card. And those last performance outfits...TO DIE FOR!...xD I think just because of my creepy fetishes my favorites would have to be Sasuke, and Neiji...But for artistic purposes, it would be naruto easily. *nod* LOVE that idea...xD he'd probably look hot too!
person The Empress
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*giant smile* Man, this story is friggin' awesome. I was up all night reading all the chapters. @_@ whew! I so love this story. I can't wait to find out what's going to happen next. I totally can't wait. *is about to die due to lack of sleep* I think I'm going to go to sleep now. Can you email me when you update, please? I'd be eternally grateful. ^_^