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for Marked By Jutsu

by Iori

person Aberration
schedule June 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, guess I'm the newest of reviewers -_-;;. Great story, late of my saying, and I guess it's safe of my assuming it'll take you forever to update, so I'll have to stay content in waiting. Keep it up ^^;;
person Cloud_haven
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
....gak a cliffly...ooohs you evil....please update soon!
person Rune
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMGOMGOMG! Gahh their outfits reminded me of direngrey XD AnD SASUCHAN IN A SKIRTO XD rotfl AHHAHA reading your outfits always makes me wanna DRAW *heart* ill note it to you if i ever get past pencil ^^ OH GEEEEZ and WAS THAT A SASUNARU MOMENT? *tears of joy* oh man! was it? but so little detail *deflat* Guu adn Creeper WIth HELL LIL KYUUBI! *runs away and hides* Some one save him BEFORE HES MOLESTED preferably sasuchan XD tahhaah always gotta push my ship yaknow ^.~ *glomp* Im SOOOOOO HAPPY YOU UPDATED *glomphugglomphug* I adore your writing and its been so long since i got to read such good writing :hugglesattack: XD XD XD Will you comic on da get this far? Im so impressed you hav so many pages already! (i always give up after 2 =_=) Unya! MoTTo! MoTTo! ...lol did that sound sexual...hahhahahaaaaaaaa well I LOVE YOU so its okay! *mwah*
person NaruSasu Uzumachia
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Can't wait for the next part! Gosh Orochimaru needs to fall out a window ^_^.
person TenshiKaitou
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, you update. And with a pretty good and still very much up to my standards chappie! I luv you! Me = Loyal fan. Heh. Anyway, gimme more action soon. I'll be waiting here!

P.S Naruto seemed a little too detached from his feelings for Sasuke in this chapter. Too weird for him to be acting so friendly towards the Uchiha all of a sudden.
person Okita Souji
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoaa!!! It's so great! XD Itachi-samaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!! lol So he's gonna have an important rule next chapter? Well, I can hardly wait for it! Please update soon! And more of Sasunaru or Itanaru =3 Anyway, love this fic so much.
person tea
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
gosh! nice fic!XD the best!!!!XD XD XD You have no idea how much I got inspired because of your fic. :D I really hate sasuke in this fic. He's such a bastard. >.< Hehe... anyway, keep up the good work and update soon! mwah!XD
person kenshinjunkie03 (too lazy to log in)
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
welcome back^_^V


(i still love your story^_^V)
person ayachan
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow o_O... i don't know how i managed to skip this story until last night! THIS IS AWESOME! i love it to death ^_^ ... orochi's a pedo isn't he o_O, i mean... itachi doesn't look like a child, so orochi goes after sasuke? freaky -_- wow, lol, it's really sad, but i keep imagining the stuffed kyuubi as like.. a stuffed kirara (from inu-yasha) or a stuffed nine-tails :P oh, and i think that the dream sequence was brilliant.. please keep up the good work!
person tokiya
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Itachi...what is he gonna do to naruto!! Wai~! BTW, sorry if the comic took SOOOO LONG..but i get my busiest time and i must consentrate with my school first >_< sorry..