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December 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sure!! I don't mind at all^^ Nice chappie, But please please please i want to see orochimaru-sama!!*impatient* Btw, the neji art that i send you is okita souji's not mine. Mine just naru and sasu. I'll send to you the other 3 next week. The exam is suck!!
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay. now the new chappies up! ^_^ Ooh! GaaraNaru- ness!! *squeals* I don't like Sasuke much so far in this. -_- He's such an ass. Like, more than usual. I'm soooooooooooooooooooooooo happy you updated!!! *jumps and dances singing "teh marked by jutsu theme" that she just randomly made up* I must know what happens soon! Pwease? I love you. Update soon?
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am I going crazy or was that the exact same chapter you just posted on the last update? Maybe I'm psychic and I read it in my head, but I'm pretty sure thats the same one....
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you decided to keep writting! This is one of my favorite stories. ^__^
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is getting more and more interesting as we get along the story. Damn Itachi but it seems the Kyuubi is attracted by him, must be all that primal energy. I am very curious about Sasuke's story, while I think he has been the biggest jerk ever to Naruto, he is also suffering. In a weird way, maybe they are good for each other. SIGH.
I am glad Neji is not the jealous type and he seems to understand that Gaara needs Naruto and his warmth. I love Neji, I want more of him XD
Keep it up!
I am glad Neji is not the jealous type and he seems to understand that Gaara needs Naruto and his warmth. I love Neji, I want more of him XD
Keep it up!
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehehe... fear the powers of dreams!!! I had a dream last night that you would update this fic with GaaNaru, and when I woke up, lo and behold! My dream came true! Yay! (I actually did have that dream, I'm not joking). Anyway, although I love the GaaNaruness of the chapter I was really confused with the Itachi and Sasuke bits. So... has Naru basicly told Sasuke he's with Itachi? And Sasuke is with Kabuto? *completly confused*
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm developing a severe Sasuke-obsession... and you said he'll become nice and friendly now? I do hope so cuz he's such a poor little guy... *hugs Sasuke*
Great work neway!
Great work neway!
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December 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Response to your response* Yup yup, I totally understand! If you've already got everything figured out, don't change it just for my benifit! XD Besides, it is your story...
*For this chapter*
I really, really, really, really, REALLY love what you're doing with Gaara-san... It just makes him that much more lovable! And, I tell you what, you story has one heck of a plot! (I had kinda guessed what was up with Sasuke...but it was Rough...very rough. Hey, it has to be SOMETHING like the manga/anime/real story, right?) Anywho, I also like that fact that Ino isn't all over everyone..mainly Sasuke. I like the personality change you gave her...Well, you didn't change it, but you made her more sain. I think I would like her Character more if she wasn't always fighting with Sakura about said person...Ramen...
And Itachi just makes the entire story sooooo much more exciting! Kyuubi's got a thing for the weasel, eh? =^.^= Heh heh heh...Well, I dun blame him...Itachi's HOT! (I was discussing this with my elder brother, last night (We were talking about how the series was getting more interesting, with Sasuke leaveing and all)):
Me: Y'know what would be so awesome?!
Bro: What?
Me: If Naruto actually TEAMED UP WITH ITACHI! Then Sasuke and him could have a show down and stuff...And they'll, like, go all insane and stuff...
Bro: Why the Hell would Naruto join Itachi?!
Me: Because he's hot...?
Bro: So that's it...*Pretending to be Naruto* "I want to join you, Itachi, so I can bath in you sizzeling hotness! And then we can beat Sasuke, since he's getting all ugly, becasue he's hanging out with Orochimaru (My bro pronouces it 'O Chi Mah Roo')-
Me: HEY! I like Orochimaru!!!
Bro: "-But if you teach me the dark arts of Hotness, I will be able to defeat him! And we can rule the word together! *mumbles, 'And I can stare at you when you get undressed...'*!!!!
Me: Like, Yeah! Itachi is SOOOO trying to get Naruto for his own purposes!!
Bro: *in a high pitched girly voice* Like, totally! I just want to tell Itachi to just hurry up and screw the little fox..MMM MMM!
Me: I like Kisame...
Bro: .....That's nice.
Yup...But, that was irellivent to the review..XD
Speaking of which, is Kisame ever going to make his Grand Entrance? (Or maybe everyone in MBJ will go to their concert...) Or is Itachi a soloist? AAAAHHH!!! I know you won't tell me, so I might as well not ask! I'm just gunna have ta wait, ya...
I really liked this chapter...
Yup...
Welll, I'll write to ya later! Tooooodles!
*For this chapter*
I really, really, really, really, REALLY love what you're doing with Gaara-san... It just makes him that much more lovable! And, I tell you what, you story has one heck of a plot! (I had kinda guessed what was up with Sasuke...but it was Rough...very rough. Hey, it has to be SOMETHING like the manga/anime/real story, right?) Anywho, I also like that fact that Ino isn't all over everyone..mainly Sasuke. I like the personality change you gave her...Well, you didn't change it, but you made her more sain. I think I would like her Character more if she wasn't always fighting with Sakura about said person...Ramen...
And Itachi just makes the entire story sooooo much more exciting! Kyuubi's got a thing for the weasel, eh? =^.^= Heh heh heh...Well, I dun blame him...Itachi's HOT! (I was discussing this with my elder brother, last night (We were talking about how the series was getting more interesting, with Sasuke leaveing and all)):
Me: Y'know what would be so awesome?!
Bro: What?
Me: If Naruto actually TEAMED UP WITH ITACHI! Then Sasuke and him could have a show down and stuff...And they'll, like, go all insane and stuff...
Bro: Why the Hell would Naruto join Itachi?!
Me: Because he's hot...?
Bro: So that's it...*Pretending to be Naruto* "I want to join you, Itachi, so I can bath in you sizzeling hotness! And then we can beat Sasuke, since he's getting all ugly, becasue he's hanging out with Orochimaru (My bro pronouces it 'O Chi Mah Roo')-
Me: HEY! I like Orochimaru!!!
Bro: "-But if you teach me the dark arts of Hotness, I will be able to defeat him! And we can rule the word together! *mumbles, 'And I can stare at you when you get undressed...'*!!!!
Me: Like, Yeah! Itachi is SOOOO trying to get Naruto for his own purposes!!
Bro: *in a high pitched girly voice* Like, totally! I just want to tell Itachi to just hurry up and screw the little fox..MMM MMM!
Me: I like Kisame...
Bro: .....That's nice.
Yup...But, that was irellivent to the review..XD
Speaking of which, is Kisame ever going to make his Grand Entrance? (Or maybe everyone in MBJ will go to their concert...) Or is Itachi a soloist? AAAAHHH!!! I know you won't tell me, so I might as well not ask! I'm just gunna have ta wait, ya...
I really liked this chapter...
Yup...
Welll, I'll write to ya later! Tooooodles!
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
must have some gaara/naruto. and why is sasuke such an ass? i know he could get like that but damn, enough's enough. but very good story.
please let sasuke realize that in order to keep naruto he can't treat him let some dirty slut.
love the story:)
please let sasuke realize that in order to keep naruto he can't treat him let some dirty slut.
love the story:)
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November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I wasn't sure what the story would be due to the summary. But since you did say to read it in one of your other fics I felt obliged. I was in for a great shock. It had a slow beginning but so far this story is awesome. Keep up the excellent work. I just keep trying to figure out who he should get with, there is Sasuke he did deserve another chance didn't he? I mean come on he got himself reincarnated. Then there is Neji, I was shocked how he was protrayed, its awesome. But I don't think he would be in it for the long haul. Then there is Gaara, I have to say there are not to many Gaara/Naruto fics out there. So I am personally rooting for him. GO GAARA!! Then there is Itachi, interesting set up. Unknown how to root. I think in the end he will be lustful for Naruto, but most likely only hurt him. So like I said I am rooting for Gaara. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.