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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, that was so sweet! You had a few little errors, like your for you're, and peek for peak, but it was otherwise well written.
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... Wierd... Somehow I just can't picture Chouji exactly like that but it sounds very good, do another!
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was the first Shikamaru Choji fic I have read...ok found. It was very good I just wish there were more of this pairing. *sigh*
Great Job ^-^
Great Job ^-^
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh... that was cute.... but would you please do what you told Naruto that you will...... and would you add Jiraiya in too? hehe.....
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was such a great fic it’s hard to find a writer that enjoys that coupling
I thought you did a very good job writing it
I hope you’ll write more on this couple in the future
^_~
i give it 9/10!
great job!
I thought you did a very good job writing it
I hope you’ll write more on this couple in the future
^_~
i give it 9/10!
great job!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I admire you for your courage to do a very uncommon coupling ^^ Awsome job too I might add
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAH! that was freekin awesome! chouji & shika are, in my humble opinion, the cutest couple ever! and that makes me upset coz its hard to find any fics of them at all, let alone good ones like this! say, do you think chouji will never get his pudge back? I'm hoping he does...haha, he doesn't look half as cute without it! XD YOU ROCK!