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Really sweet and cute! It's nice to read fluff for them. They deserved happiness.

You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary

Beautiful fanfic! I loved it... *_* Zabuza and Haku need all the fluffy loving they can get. lol The only thing I suggest to you is to spellcheck.. there were a few grammatical errors and typos. Other than that, perfect! ^ ^

It's alright.
I don't really know what's wrong with it but...
It feels as if you typed this in a hurry.

aww this was ur fist zabuza/haku fic? U did a really great job with it. The fluff was wonderful, as was the lemon. Keep up the great work

>.< that was sweeettttt awwwwwwwwwwwww *loves it* Just what I needed. heh. heheheh... *ahem* anyhow, great job for the first fic! I hope to write..something..someday

OK, MAN, THIS IS JUST MY FAVOURITE HAKU AND ZABUZA FAN FIC EVER! i have read so much ones, but ... umm... i dunno... this one is just perfect!!! just perfect!! i love u!! *O* make more!!!! keep going!!!! wa wa!!! *-*

don't feel bad for writing sap! sap is great!! XD XD I enjoyed this, it was sweet. ZabuHaku rules!!!

sexy sexy sexy! hakuXzabuza is the greatest pairing ever...next to kyXsol aparantly...hehehe...but haku is a bit too much of a girl for REALLLLLLLL yaoi...but i guess since he DOES have a penis...i guess its ok ;)...yay for soshi-chan!

Oh...I just love fics when Zabuza is confused about Haku. ^___^ This was a nice chapter - I think there were a few places where you could have replaced names with pronouns, or other descriptive words, considering Haku-kun and Zabsan san are both male. I like where this is going...