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for With These Bloody Hands

by Delores

person sdjfiu
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
person KuroiHato
schedule June 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh! There're all gonna meet at the ramen place. *chuckles* Classic. I love it so far, keep it going on strong!
person Vague
schedule February 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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Laefe is a new online epublishing and you are among the first group of authors invited over to the site. I hope that you will consider it. You can find Laefe at http://itsuwari.com/bookstore/. My name is Emilia Baptiste, you can call me Emi when we talk on msn @ waterempath@hotmail.com. All the information you will need will be on the website and anything that is not clear you can ask me.

All I ask is that you give Laefe a look and see if it might be where you would like to further progress in your quest to writing your ultimate story. Thank you for your time and I do hope to hear from you soon.

Emi Baptiste
Admin of Itsuwari.com and Laefe Epublishing.
person oohshiny
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ooooo, i cant WAIT fr the next chapter XD this story is very interesting, with an unused plotline, so EMAIL ME WHEN YOU UPDATE PLEASE!!!! me email address is deannathx@comcast.net
person hisoka
schedule May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is interesting i wonder if youll continue it
person frizzy197
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*thumbs up!* i love it. can't wait for next ch.
person runawayshinobi
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Simple but I like it... keep it coming! .
person Carrot
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw man! You gonna update or what!!?? This story looks kick-ass! I've never read a story with such an age difference between Sasuke and Naruto.
Know this! I'm the 're-writer'. When i read a story that hasn't been updated in a long time i take the idea's i like from them and rewrite'em. If this isn't updated very soon i'm going to rewrite this story but a little different. I've done it over ten times so don't think i wont do to you. You have been warned-_-

EEk i love your story so much!
person Kai
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope the next one wil be longer....This is a cool story!
LOVE YA!!!
Kai
person Blisblop
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are gonna continue,so many do not.I will rveiw seriously when your next chap goes up.I really hope you do!