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You should continue soon! I like this fic, so you better update soon!!!!

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UPDATE!!! I want mooreee! *clings* I wont let go until I have more. And thankfully I have clones lingling so I won't have to all the time.

Ooooh. LQ likes! Yes she does. *nods* The whole SasuNaru angle is a new one and something i look forward to reading more of. I saw a couple grammar...not mistakes really...just a few little things I noticed like a couple of sentences that could be combined into a bigger sentence and a bit overmuch usage of the word "then", but really it's nicely written, I'm just highly anal about things like that.

If you really want to write a yuri lemon, I have a few suggestions and pointers I could pass on. And I have not completely offended you I just want to say again I am very much enjoying this. It's refreshing to read something that doesn't follow the norm.

Ooooh. LQ likes! Yes she does. *nods* The whole SasuNaru angle is a new one and something i look forward to reading more of. I saw a couple grammar...not mistakes really...just a few little things I noticed like a couple of sentences that could be combined into a bigger sentence and a bit overmuch usage of the word "then", but really it's nicely written, I'm just highly anal about things like that.

If you really want to write a yuri lemon, I have a few suggestions and pointers I could pass on. And if I have not completely offended you I just want to say again I am very much enjoying this. It's refreshing to read something that doesn't follow the norm.

Mmmm Ramen.... Ramen and Sasuke and Naruto AND Shikamaru! Can't get much better. But what about Pakkun?

it's really gooooooooooooood! please update soon! can't wait to read more! i'm totally in love with this story!!!!!!! >_<
oh and i have a question!! WHY does Sasuke wan't to kill Naruto? must be a reason right?????

When will 'these hands' become bloody? This was written differently than most other stories. I don't know exactly what was different about it, but it was definitely different. It was almost like there no no set point of view. We were just observing these people and occasionally were able to read some of their thoughts. I like it a lot. I'm not going to tell you to update soon because everyone says that and I'll let you do what you want. It's not like I will have much of an effect on whether you do or do not update. Either you wan con continue, or you don't. Sasuke didn't really seem like an assassin in this chapter. But, it's not like he really did anything other than compliment Sakura on her hair-do which was caused by a stupid accident. It's funny how easy it is to be manipulated by someone if you really like them a lot. Sakura thinks the sun shines out of Sasuke's ass, so why would he lead her astray? Anyway, the whole point of this large review is to basically say that I like your story and it's pretty cool. Ciao.

*waits impatiently for the next chapter* >.>

So Kakashi and Iruka is Naruto's parents, huh? (This for some reason reminds me of the ssex-sex-marriage debate in the United States...IF YOU CAN LET HOMOSEXUAL COUPLES ADOPT KIDS, THERE'S NO REASON TO NOT LET THEM GET MARRIED, YOU CONGRESS BAKAS!!) Anywhoo, this fic would be a lot better if you give us more detail on the character's pasts. Please Continue!!