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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was certainly... interesting. *murrs* Sasuke and Neji... Both wanting Naruto but too afraid to touch him... Eeeeneresting. The idea has merit. ^^
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH! that was so sad!...yet good. 'Good' in a 'bad' way, yes yes keeheehee *is a pervert* XD
Yes, please write more, coz this is good but short and more would be good...um, yes I'm rambling. More Please!
ps. Can't wait for more backlash!!! [You write good smutt! XD]
Yes, please write more, coz this is good but short and more would be good...um, yes I'm rambling. More Please!
ps. Can't wait for more backlash!!! [You write good smutt! XD]
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April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whatever brought this out of you.... man do it again!! that was freaking awesome. it was short and yet satisfying and yet not all at once!! i think that it deserves an expansion like pilots often do! similar but different so as not to ruin the original in anyway ^___^ please! a follow up of SOME kind anyway. definitely the type of writing i would expect of the author of Backlash! ^__^ thank you for this wonderful mini-story!!
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good. I liked it, but I'm a little confused. Why won't they touch Naruto? Did I miss something? I flikelike I did. Still good though, just confusing (though, its 2 AM... that could be saying something too... XDD )
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even though this was short, it speaks volumes about the relationships between the three shinobi: Sasuke, Nejnd Nnd Naruto. Only someone as talented as yourself could say so much with so little. Well done.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I'm in love with you now. You've shown me why these two should totally be together. The last line destroyed me. "...devoured the ghost of Naruto between them" THAT was brilliance in words, poetry in motion. I love the concept of them being unwilling to "taint" Naruto with their own "darkness." It's just a wonderful concept and makes me almost desperate to write Neji fiction. *happy beyond words at the angsty, violent sex of Neji/Sasuke*
Angst-whores unite! *waves a banner for your angsty brilliance*
Angst-whores unite! *waves a banner for your angsty brilliance*
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...that was good. The whole not wanting to take any of Naru's innocence or "perfection" away is good. I like it. Very nicely done Neji/Sasu.
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April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i never would have thought of neji/sasuke, and dammit, now i want more! ^^ very...yum. dark and sexah. loved it<3