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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
an awsome story very romantic cant wait till the next ch
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October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ouch!! Hiashi needs a good bitch slapping for that one. Anywhoo, I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!
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January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
update please don't let this story die
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow great story, please update
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December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story - well written and thought out. A few inconsistencies - namely Sakura and Ino's ranks in parts 2 & 3, but that's to be expected given the time gap. Looking forward to more, should you return to writing this fanfiction. ^_^
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man i wanted to see hinata's father to get his ass kicked self-rightous bastard. i hope to see the next chapter soon
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September 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeassse update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That is so cute! Sorry, but I'm totally a sucker for that whole love conquers all. I mean, my favorite movie is the Princess Bride, nothing more need be said. I can't wait for the next chapter. I realize you're busy and have a life and all, but I do hope the muse visits you soon. Thanks.
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September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome stoory plz review
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey nice story so far. I just got done watching Naruto Saturday night. Which is about Hinata when she was given to Kurenai to train to become a Ninja. She wasn't loved just like Naruto. I see why people like that pairing cuz they are a like in so many ways, but different as she had a family but didn't care about her too much. Like the way you make Naruto protect the woman he loves. Hope to see Naruto and Hiashi fight for her to be back in the household and prove to them she isn't who she once was. Josh e-mail me when you get a chance.