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Hate to rush you, but your work has me hooked. I hope that you finish this piece.

Yay! I think this is one of the better fan fics I've seen for this couple in a long time! It's very refreshing to read a non yaoi for once. I really don't get the fasination with m/m parings, and I love Hinata Naruto as a couple! I even like otheother parings in the fic. Update soon!

Ok, first of all, I have to say, you are so right. I was really annoyed with seeing nothing but sasunaru as far as the eye could see. It sucks wading through the sea of yaoi when you're looking for things like sasusaku, or sakunaru or hinanaru.

Next, I want to say that your writing skill is awesome. Quite inspirational man, thanks for that.

Next, I love your fic so far, write more soon -please!!- I think I see hints of a deep plot, do I?

Finally, thanks to you, I'll be looking for more hinanaru fiction. And maybe I'll try making one.

And in this chapter, more plot, while still keeping the hinanaru romance. It's so amazing! Please don't stop! Don't! NOOOOO!! .... <.< >.> *quietly backs out of the room*

Awesome. I'm a bit of a a sap for accurate portrayals of character. I like how you have done the romance and kept the spoilers minimal. Keep up the good work so I can keep reading it.

oh this is gooood!!! please update quickly, i like the plot and everything though the part about how kakashi-sensei was talking about naruto wanting acknowledgement from sasuke almost seems like you're implying this is a yaoi. IT BETTER NOT BE!! cos i LOVE naruto and hinata stories... i think you're doing a great job with this story, and i hope that in your next chapter, se ane and the rest of the people unintentionally finds out about kyubi being sealed in naruto's body and how they all feel super guilty for not trying to understand him more and stuff... yeah and that they find out about naruto and hinata going together..... oh yeah, and how about the closet pervert during a training duel, tries to make a move and hinata just to make naruto lose his temper and concentration, causing him to get beaten. so closet pervert can lecture him about how it could bring about his downfall during his battles......
GREAT STORY SO FAR!!! keep up the good work.. by the way, do bite marks have a lump??? neither do love bites. do u think u could somehow explain it? thanks for listening to my ranting haha

A very good and interesting story. The first chapter wasn't half bad, but it's in the second one where things take a turn for the waaay better. I liked your original choice of Ebisu for teaching Naruto and Hinata.

UPDATE SOON~!

i hope to read more soon! This fic is so awesome! I mean it, it is SO good!

I'm a Yaoi fangirl at heart but I love NaruHina pairings. Hi's 's just so cute and putting her with Naruto is even cuter. Out of all the het pairings in Naruto that one is my favorite. Very nicely written fic. i"m glad I took the time to read it.