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by Suukou

person gkdsjg
schedule July 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You are now cursed. You must send this on or you will be killed. Tonight at 12:00am, by Bloody Mary. This is no joke. So don't think you can quickly get out of it and delete it now because Bloody Mary will come to you if you do not send this on. She will slit your throat and your wrists and pull your eyeballs out with a fork. And then hang your dead corpse in your bedroom cupboard or put you under your bed. What's your parents going to do when they find you dead? Won't be funny then, will it? Don't think this is a fake and it's all put on to scare you because your wrong, so very wrong. Want to hear of some of the sad, sad people who lost their lives or have been seriously hurt by this email?

CASE ONE -
Annalise [Surname Removed] :She got this email. Rubbish she thought. She deleted it. And now, Annalise dead.

CASE TWO -
Louise [Surname Removed]: She sent this to only 4 people and when she woke up in the morning her wrists had deep lacerations on each. Luckily there was no pain felt, though she is scarred for life.

CASE THREE -
Thomas [Surname Removed]: He sent this to 5 people. Big mistake. The night Thomas was lying in his bed watching T.V. The clock shows '12:01am'. The T.V misteriously flickered off and Thomas's bedroom lamp flashed on and off several times. It went pitch black, Thomas looked to the left of him and there she was, Bloody Mary standing in white rags. Blood everywhere with a knife in her hand then disappeared. The biggest fright of Thomas's life.

Warning... NEVER look in a mirror and repeat -'Bloody Mary.Bloody Mary.' Bloody Mary... I KILLED YOUR SON' Is it the end for you tonight! YOU ARE NOW CURSED

We strongly advise you to send this email on. It is seriously NO JOKE. We don't want to see another life wasted. ITS YOUR CHOICE... WANNA DIE TONIGHT? If you send this email to...

NO PEOPLE - You're going to die.

1-5 PEOPLE - You're going to either get hurt or get the biggest fright of your life.

5-15 PEOPLE - You will bring your family bad luck and someone close to you will die.

15 -25 OR MORE PEOPLE - You are safe from Bloody Mary
person Vague
schedule April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hello Author,
I am a huge fan of yaoi and have started a site archiving all the good yaoi fiction. I am glad to say that your story has made it into the archive. Congratulations on telling a truly moving tale.

About the Archive:
The archive is nothing more than a site which links directly to good stories. I do not claim your story as my own but rather I encourage others to read and review it as it deserves that recognition.

Your story is linked at http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php?showtopic=14. If you would like it to be removed from the archive or are concerned about anything then please send me an email. I will be glad to answer or remove it. Thank you.

Vague
Administrator of the Yaoi Fanfiction Archive (YFA)
http://z4.invisionfree.com/YFA/index.php
schedule March 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mother of Squishy Green Frogs! That was insanely HOT. Damn you're good.
person Blue Fire Fox
schedule December 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was hot!!! You really put that pairing to a unique use! is there more?
person AerieTigre
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God damn. That was hot.
I like the whole masochistic!Gaara thing a lot. A whooole lot.
You should expand upon such an idea; it's got some real potential behind it.
person nocturne
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
::drools:: holy fucking SHIT that was hot. ^----^ I luff it! there's not enough of this pairing out there...
person Monster_Envy
schedule December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that was amaziing
person Himemiya
schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is unbearably hot. Ninjas and D/s has never been hotter. It made my stomache all fluttery. Beautiful use of Neji and Gaara, neither did anything that made me think "that's not how they would be".
person kyaru-chan
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*worships*
person Emis
schedule November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! ....*wipes drool from mouth* that was awesome. i lurv you I lurv NejiGaara..mmm NejiGaara very well written i like the angsty/dark things going through Gaara's head poor little gaara just wants some pain..but i dont know if thats all neji can give him. Very good angst