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by Gaby

schedule January 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Aha^^ this is awesome. I'll write you a Tsunade Pr0n fic, hold the Icky, if You'll review my stories in exchange. I'm in the process of moving them over right now. Most of them can be found on Fanfiction . net under my pen name Biotomegami Lyanvis. or on ficwad under the penname Lyanvis. I'll review again when I have the Tsunade fic written.
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my word! This was too funny. The ending was fantastic. It seems to give a wink and a nudge at Tsunade's abilities while giving a slight tilt to the thought that maybe Tsunade was Gai's special someone all along. Great job!
schedule January 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Test test
person Ritsu
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am I completely crazy or was there at one point a chapter in which Gai screams out Lee's name? It seems to be missing...

Still a great work, though. Good job keeping Gai in character!
person Anon
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
funny :)
person Archeeka
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um.... not sure why, but.... half of chapter 5 is missing. It stops when Tsunade orgasms from Gai's Extreme Cunnilotus.
person kaligoddess
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just about died laughing at this, but definitely in a good way. Way to go!
person Alivida
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hysterical. I loved when Gai's tongue was expiring and he was making bets with himself on what he would have to do if it failed before Tsunade finished. And they both had a good time and that's what's important.
person black
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Almost went down to her hips? BWAHAHAHAHAHAH..Saggy boobies..Bwahahah
person j0e
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hahah tha that was some funny porn!!!

"gai!"

"tsunade-sama!"

"GAI!"

"LEE!"

"what hte fuck!?!?"


haha that was hilarious...