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for Broken Dolls

by SuukouAndAllie

person Kazukin
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wowies! I really liked this story, oh wait...I liked both...Hee. ^^ But really--great writing. I loved the angsty-ness and the tenderness mixed in one package..like leeks and strawberries..but anyways..great job, hope you write a third!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule February 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ho-ly shit!!! That was totally amazing!!! I absolutely loved it!!! ^___^ Wow........what a great story........so kawaii, yet so sad, too..... *sniff* Itacki's so mean to poor little Sasuke-kun......... ^^;; Will you write another one? I saw that you had a third story, but I wasn't sure if it was related to these two........ I would love to know what happens, expecially how Sasuke reacts the next time Itachi shows up, and wether or not Kakashi ever finds out......... ^___~ Keep up the good work!!! Ja ne!!!
person Hyuuga Nikita
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I am a huge fan of UchihacestO_O
person Kura
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So evil ... yet so good. I love it, beautiful angst. Please write more ... is there no way Itachi will have a chaof hof heart? T____T
person wingedbunny
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waiiii~~~ i love this series!
the angst is so yummy.... poor sasuke though~ XD||||

well~ can't wait for the next one!
person Treze
schedule May 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn...you're good.

Broken dolls, huh?

It's just too damn good.
Now I'm gonna have to lust for Itachi . Even if he won't stay long.

You *should* post more fics.
person crystal
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww!! This is so bittersweet! I love itasasu but i feel so sorry for sasuke.... Anyways though, keep writing! >.< I want to see what happens with sasuke...
person Ookima
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say this was amazing!
poor Sasuke though
I hope you plan on writting more chapters
hope someone can make Sasuke feel better
maybe Naruto?
silly thoughts of mine
update I tell ya!
because you're way of writting is really amazing and you describe stuff perfectly!
person ally
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh...wow. oh my *god*...damn. ::sits wide-eyed for five straight minutes:: that's so...tragic. and angsty. and damn... ::stares at keyboard:: that was really good...really...damn... x_x i think i need a minute to collect myself... ::cries::

just so you know, i'm drawing something for this. try 'n stop me :P
person Kashshaptu (too lazy to sign in)
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was amazing. hehe I like Itachi's plan better than 'just killing him' hehehe, Can't wait for the next part (if there is one, well, I guess there should be, right? right??)