rate_review Reviews

hey
i got one of your fanfics off of livejournal.com/community/narufanfic
rite now its about one chap.long and an alternatite universe one (sorry i forgot the name of your fanfic)
i really liked it so i decided to read this one
well this one is awesome
it seems like you stayed true to everyone's characters
for instance sakura has inner sakura and often wants to say things she cant
same withs sasuke...sasuke is so freaking internal but it felt like sasuke is really like how he was portrayed in your story
your a very good writer and you made their love and issues seem so believable like it was right out of the series
also i love gaara in your story and mika!!!
it made me smile
n_n
~caz~

Without a doubt, unquestionably, most certainly the best Naruto story I have ever read. Including the original! It is beatifully written, and quite enthralling. I couldn't stand to leave for bed at chapter 16, I would have been unable to sleep knowing that the rest of the story is sitting mere inches away, waiting to be finished. So here I am, reveiwing this work of art at one AM. I'll probably have to read it again tomorrow just in case sleep somehow erases some tiny bit of this story from my memory. Ah well, I thoroughly enjoyed it all the same. Although, I was fervently hoping that Sakura would end up with Gaara, but I like the ending just the same. Well, maybe not just the same...but it's a good ending anyway! I do hope you write that prequel of Kakashi and Sakura, I would just love to read it! I can hardly wait; oh darn, now I won't be able to sleep tonight even though I finished the story! Ah well, please post it soon!

I HAVE RETURNED! Sorry coz of my pops. HE changed the place of computer so I cannot! Nice fin! Im crying! Its so sweet!

excellent! brilliantly written! and powerfully enchanting : )

i love this!!!!!!!!!!!!! i love you tea leaf!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^

I was hooked ever since you first started posting this story. It's the best Naruto story I've read so far.

as always wonderful story. i like your decision with a simple ending as i think its best suited to the story, it left me with a happy fuzzy feeling. I think a big dramatic finish would have ... i don't know let down the story or something... so the choice you made was really good. any plans to make other storie's soon ^.^ ? *kyubi's ears perk up*

well....it's over I guess. I really liked this story up until now....but that ending...well...stunk. Really bad. The author was great at keeping my interest until then and updating frequently. Thanks a bunch! You gre great.

finally finished the fic, eh? *pat*pat* good job!

hm..i'm glad it turned out to be sasusaku fic..i like that pairing...

i'm quite surprised that you left many questions unanswered...like...why the butterflies stopped approaching sakura (she said so herself)...how kakashi and sakura mixed blood...and sakura's various relationships with other people...i was hoping that some of it would be explained...as..it seemed important to the story..

but...after reading the ending..i think that it really doesn't matter...
i give you much applause for the last scene with sasuke and sakura...it was simple..straight forward...in character...and most of all ..it expressed their thoughts and feelings in a very..understandable way...it's very well written ...and it just made their biggest problems seem like nothing at all...like...they're happy..and nothing else really mattered...a very interesting way to end the story...

thank you so much for writing this story, you're really great author..the plot waeat.eat..the characterizations of sakura and sasuke were amazing...you write fast..(which is the absolute best)....there are some typos (=P)...but..im sure many of us can just fix that when we read it...oh yeah...you didn't leave us with too many clift hangers...and definately not for long...so..i must give my thanks for providing me with such great entertainment for the days since i've started reading the fic..i looked forward to it everyday..and always disappointed when i didn't see an update (well..i checked the fic often =P)

i don't think i can thank you enough...^_^
i look forward to your next piece of fiction..

aaaaaaaw, that was such a sweet ending ^_^ I'm glad about how it turned out, you should write more fanfics in the future, well, thx for the fic^_^