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for The Butterfly

by tealeaf

person archermartyr
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH MAN, I hope Sasuke gets his ass kicked for purposely putting his hand around Sakuras waist to "claim" her in front of Kakashi. HE DESERVES IT! Don't let her end up with HIM! LET HIM SUFFER
person h.kou
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully written! Just absolutely brilliant!!!! Kudos to you!!!! I really enjoyed it so thank you very very much : )
person Kashshaptu
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaah, I can't wait for Sasuke to do 'something' hehehe, let's just hope Sakura doesn't mind. I didn't think I said this before so here it is: you're the fastest updater I've ever seen^_^ thx for my daily suply of good fanfiction!^_^
person kei
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... i love chapter 18. Tainted Blood.... hehehehe... that was a good one, Sasuke's Conscience and Ego fighting for dominance. who wouldve thought conscience started it! :P the conversation was really interesting and wats wrong with Sakura? her memories?th Kth Kakashi.... complicated... but exciting, no doubt. keep it up... love it!
person Calophi
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I can't wait to see who you'll have Sakura end up with, but I think I'll cry if it isn't Sasuke. :-(
person Ivy
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEEEEAAAH! Continue! I wanna hear what sasukes gonna say! I luv it! Continue! And please answer my email...
person Kasiree
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, it's leaning on SasuSaku. I was hoping it would lean to GaaSaku, because I am seriously in love with that pairing. But continue otherwise, you have really good writing skills, great job on this. Continue soon.
person dragonflyelj
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I was finally able to log on. I loved these last few chapters. The angsty feeling rolling off of Sasuke, the shock Tsunade is feeling, the violation from Sakura. And she renews her bonds with the butterflies. Hmmm, I wonder... if she were to go for long enough with no cuts, therefore no contact with the butterflies, would the contact lessen or even end? OK, well it is way past bedtime, so I will talk to you soon.
Huggles, your friend n fan,
Fly
person Ivy
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You weren't kidding when you said you always update! I wasnt able to review in 17 coz when i pressed review button there were too may connection problem whatever! As usual, UPDATE SOON AND MORE POWER!
person dragonflyelj
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OK, I just couldn't let this rest, I just gotta know what Tsunade saw. So, you just absoulutely have to write that sequel you were talking about maybe doing, or I will just, just die and haunt you for the rest of your living years. MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!