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whoah, everytime I come here you have at least updated 3 chapters! you're fast! I like it, I can't wait to see what will happen next^_^

i really luv this fic! the idea is so original and very interesting! personally i'm really starting to hate the idea of Sasuke/Sakura in this fic.... >> i don't know why 'cause i luv the pairing ^^;;
i guess i'm a die heart fan for KakaSaku :3 .......ya....and you know >> << maybe Sakura just needs Kakashi lovings to help her :P ..... 6_6 9_9 this story is totally pointing to KakaSaku! YAY! .....ok don't mind me ^^;;; ANYWAY luvt eh story and update soon! not that i have to really say that 'cause you update fast, WHICH IS AWESOME! :3

omgomg..another chapter..so soon...

i LOVE the ego vs superego fight...the end...was....hahahahha ^_______________________^

so..blood/chakra mixing eh....what? how? why?......*needs to know*..

mind raping eh?...coudln't believe tsunade-sama actually resorted to that...i thought should would just be more persistent and question sakura repeatedly..but then...maybe she really wants to help kakashi...and we need the plot to move, ne? ^_^

can't wait for the next chapter!~

Now that was a little surprise there! Sakura n Kakashi? hmmm, me thinks I have a new possible fav pairing... Naaaa!!! gotta love the Sakura/Sasuke pairing. But poor Kakashi, there is just no woman for him, well, I suppose I could volunteer! mwahahaha. This chapter did neel eel off to me, I really liked it. As to the beta reader thing, ummm, there are a lot of fics out there that desperately need betas, this fic is not one of them. So there are a few mistakes, at the rate that you are putting out the chapters, and the amount written in them, there are gonna be mistakes. I get so involved in the story that by the end of the chapter I can't even remember what they were in the first place. One of the things I love about your story, is that I can come home from work, and put the kids to bed, and there are two new chapters for me to read, and you are right, a beta would most definately slow you down.

For myself, I have found that I am learning as I go. I feel that my writing has improved as I have written more. I am sure that most people are that way, and if you are having a problem with something, if someone points it out, then you can work on it, and find a system so that you fix it. Soon it will become second nature to you to do it that way. It is an ever-learning process, but I feel your works stands well enough without a beta. And another thing to remember, you can not please everyone, all of the time.

aff ate my first review...omg.....*throws something at the wall* ugh!!! i can't believe it did that...i wrote so much too...
i'll try my best to remember what i wrote..

first off, i think the two chapters really clarified (for me at least)..how sasuke's feeling..thank you for that..

secondly...i would have to say that my impression of garaa in this fic is well...i think he reminds of a wise monk..(ironic, isn't it? cause doesn't he have the spirit of a monk inside him or soemthing?)...he seems to really understand life and human nature...he's able to ask sakura the perfect questions..tke hke her think about what she wants...in contrast to what she believes she wants..he has this way to reach her inner compass and let that guide her rather than the ideal self ...i wish i had someone around me like that...^_^

thirdly..i really love your descriptions of scenary(sp)...i can just "see" them...and they're beautiful too...they're simple..but they're really good ^_^

thankies for such a quick update!

For Ivy:
the whole hypothermia thing....is a flashback, according to my understand..
and i think sakura positioned kakashi's hand on her hair...maybe because it gives sakura the contact from kakashi that she's missed but there's no skin contact so there's no pattern flaring about...
and..kakashi's still in a coma (for now, i hope he wakes up soon..that'll throw everyone into more confusion..maybe)...

Told ya I was waiting for it! ME agaim stm still confused, Kakashi stripped Sakura off HER clothes, removed HIS and crushed HER to HIM? I thought Kakashi was in a coma? And how come she woke up with his hand in her hair? For a minute i thought it was Sasuke? Kakashi woke up, is it? What? then she said to lee that he was still in a coma? Then how did he do it? Dream? Narcolepsy? What? Email me! Or answer me? I'm dizzY!

Yeah! Go dragonflyelj! sasuke/Sakura rulez!

LOL! I loved this chapter. Normally getting a pair of characters drunk, these two in particular, just to get them 'togetherouldouldn't work but with the hell they've gone thorugh and are going trhough it works wonderfully. Especially since it didn't really go past the kissing. ^.^ I loved how Sakura ordered him back to bed with her as well *GRIN* Keep up the fantastic work with this fic. I enjoy reading it very much.

Hey! Me again! Great chappies, but I dont get the last part in 15, Kakashi slept with sakura naked? What about the wounds? Why didnt Sasuke want to hear the answer? Please email me.nd und update me too! More power!

NOOOOOOOO! Dont pair Sakura with Kakashi! There are many stories with that pairing and only one SasuSaku. So to make a difference, i beg you, make it SASUSAKU. THEY ROCK! Are you friendster? Im your fan also, just to remind ya!