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can there please be a story alert? how are u supposed to know your favorite story has been updated!?

Very nice chapter! It feels like Christmas every morning when I see updates. I'm glad you included the missing scenes ^^ The love square is very interesting too. I find myself leaning towards either a Gaara or Kakashi, Sasuke's been such an ass in the manga..let him squirm. I'm loving the updates and the soap-opera feel to the story, keep up the great work.

come on, pair Sakura and Kakashi, man, that'd be best and you KNOW IT ! Imply a previous sexual relationship between them and FREAK OUT SASUKE, heheh he deserves it.

Damn! with a chapter like that, I can go to bed happy! hehe I loved it! poor Sasuke got a bloody nose, but I loved the play between him and Sakura. And I think she helped his ego get over getting his face knocked on, lmao!!!! I can't wait to see more sweet scenes like this! And we can't forget my fav Bishi, seems you have some stuff in mind for him, can't wait to find out!

hm...ch15..what do i think about it...
i think the "off" part would be in the conversations between sakura and sasuke..not that the characters are OOC or anything, no...
it's the content? i dunno..i'm not 100% sure about why sasuke is so...upset..once he gets his answers...is he jealous? but he doesn'allyally seem like it..and there's really nothing for him to be jealous of...from my pov, i see sakura and kakahi's relationship..more of....a father-daughter..?.....like....she slept with him naked..but that doesn't mean they "slept" together....did it? i'm confused...i think...heh...i'm really bad at this..sorry

i like sasuke's ego and superego beating each other...that was funny...heh

thank you for writing such a great fic!

Its getting really, ry goy good!!! I can't stop reading this story!!! ^_^

I really lyk ur story! It expresses things the way the reader wants too, like a flowing melody! Update soon!

Another great chapter! This reads like a soap opera, I'm enjoying the the possibility of a love triangle (or square XP) I saw in your A/N there's mention of a deleted scene in your LJ, but I didn't see a link to your journal. Can you share the link, or friend me ::big grin:: http://www.livejournal.com/users/wicked_innuendo/
thanks!

*laughs at chp12*

light-hearted comedy is great ^___^ i still can't believe he fell onto the floor...heh...
oh yeah..i thought you weren't supposed to drink when you have wounds and stuff? but that's probably just old wives' tales..heh...
can't wait for next chapter( kay

yay for chapter 10!

hm...i dunno..about the part after sakura wakes up from the "coma"...she's quite talkative...like..i thought she didn't want to open her voice to anyone anymore...i was expecting somethign darker...is sakura healing psychologically..cause of the gypies....since sakura liked them in the beginning?..but then agian...happy sakura is good...^_^

i think the part where sakura talks to kakashi is very well done..kakashi is so funny..^_^..i really like taht part..i can't wait to find out..how kakashi got into a coma...is sakura's skin really poisonous? or is that just psychological...>_<

go sasusaku!~ XD