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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You've got an incredible storyline going on, I look forward to future updates.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh god yes! this is the type of fic that i search for every day and mostly never find. this, this is "Bloodlines" b SOC Puppet quality! pleaseplease write more some time soon. i started reading this around 2, and suddenly, its like 5! i was entranced! [oh, that sounded strange..] anyway please keep writing!
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Sasuke is hot on her trail, and can't wait to see what happens when he finds her. I am glad he found out about Kakashi, and I hope that Sakura pulls that knife outta her arm some time soon, hehe. damn, everytime she does something like that I just cringe. Huggles,
Fly
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the parts where Sakura remembers Kakashi, I would like to see more of those in upcoming chapters. I just love this story all around, hehe. I can't wait to see more of Sasuke's reaction as well. This little girl may be what Gaara has always needed, I like that you put him in charge of her care, can't wait to read more.
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...
at first..i read the summary..didn't expect much...but..wow...^_^;;;
*is speechless*
well, i think the fic is really well written..plotwise and stylewise...but...i think the summary could be better...maybe put something from chp1 and 2..where you describe the butterflies..and how they're like sakura..but don't mention you're describing sakura..i think it would be more attractive..as for the spoilers..imho, i think it would be sufficent to put it in the warning part of the first chapter...
but anyways, that's the only thing i think could be improved...*grins*....hehehehhe...*starts fangirling*...i really like this idea of sakura and the butterflies..it reminds me of a fic called "desired and undesired"...(i think that's the title, great fic),thatthat fic...orochimaru calls sakura "butterfly"..but just as a nickname...hehehe..here's it literal!~ XD...
i think its' really interesting how you give the butterflies life...how they get jealous of other people..how they protect sakura...but then..they also pose a threat to eone one around h.>_<.>_< so..what are they gonna do in the end? i mean...>_<
oh..i just realised something....if the butterflies live inside her..is that kinda like...the bug dude? how the bugs live inside him? that's kinda creepy....
but anyhow...thank you so much for writing this fic, and..i hope to read more!! oh..btw..do you have a posting schedule or do you just post as you write? (i read all 6 chapters in one sitting...and they don't tell you when you posted each individual chapter)...this is the longest review i've ever written...^___^ thank you!! *hugs*
at first..i read the summary..didn't expect much...but..wow...^_^;;;
*is speechless*
well, i think the fic is really well written..plotwise and stylewise...but...i think the summary could be better...maybe put something from chp1 and 2..where you describe the butterflies..and how they're like sakura..but don't mention you're describing sakura..i think it would be more attractive..as for the spoilers..imho, i think it would be sufficent to put it in the warning part of the first chapter...
but anyways, that's the only thing i think could be improved...*grins*....hehehehhe...*starts fangirling*...i really like this idea of sakura and the butterflies..it reminds me of a fic called "desired and undesired"...(i think that's the title, great fic),thatthat fic...orochimaru calls sakura "butterfly"..but just as a nickname...hehehe..here's it literal!~ XD...
i think its' really interesting how you give the butterflies life...how they get jealous of other people..how they protect sakura...but then..they also pose a threat to eone one around h.>_<.>_< so..what are they gonna do in the end? i mean...>_<
oh..i just realised something....if the butterflies live inside her..is that kinda like...the bug dude? how the bugs live inside him? that's kinda creepy....
but anyhow...thank you so much for writing this fic, and..i hope to read more!! oh..btw..do you have a posting schedule or do you just post as you write? (i read all 6 chapters in one sitting...and they don't tell you when you posted each individual chapter)...this is the longest review i've ever written...^___^ thank you!! *hugs*
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
As always, I loved this chapter, and can't wait to read more. I went and checked out that site for non-yaoi Naruto fics, thank you for sharing that!
huggles,
Fly
huggles,
Fly
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, I just gotta Huggle you to death!!!! You make me feel so loved, hehe. ty for such a nice compliment! I really liked where you went with this chapter, and I personally don't mind that it is shorter than the others, it is the content that counts. I loved the part where the whole Naruto gang was holding Sasuke down and force-feeding him, I cracked up. (Don't I know it about them charlie horses! We got 'em in the US too) Ok, on to the next chapter!
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, original plot, I like the butterflies. ^^ For italics, save your document as .htm or html, ff.net will recogonize that format. Congrats on being hosted at Rokudaime, AKS has a nice assortment of ficage there.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey, I read chapters 3 & 4 earlier at work, but couldn't leave a review, so I am back now to tell you, I just love the way you portray Gaara here, actually all of the characters, and I will be checking often for updates.
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey... a friend of miold old me about ur fic. she's right, it's a great one! i love it. but i was wondering y did u post it here? y didn't u post it at fanfiction.net? doesn't look like an adult fic. but anyway, i love it! hope u'll keep writing, but i'm not too sure about the lime, lemon and all part k? not much of a fan for those. i'll be back for more! and... wat's wih the gypsy tribe? wont sakura go back? is she gonna end up wit the rafael guy???? please write more!!! bye!