rate_review Reviews

Awesome. So what's going to happen now? What about Atsukti and Itachi? Great start. Keep up the awesome work. coolsa.

I do hope you continue with the story. I've really enjoyed reading it so far. It's one of my favorites. I really enjoy how you've twisted up Naruto and Sasuke, and how they're twisting up the others. I'm sorry I've not reviewed before. When I tried neither adultfan nor ff.net let me.

Woh. This story is awesome. It' svery dark which makes it good. I love how Sasuke and Naruto are acting. It makes them have a creeply sexier apeal. I kinda wanna see a demonic mating scene between the two. oooohhhh....Well anyway. Good luck on the next chapter.

I do hope you finish it

oh I loved it so far!! If that was the end I may as well cry!! oh if you decide to continue, then update soon!!! ^_^

Oh, god, that hurts. uch.uch. In such a good way. *loves* PLEASE continue this story. It's very very original and your writing style is rather minimalist but gets across exactly what it needs to. Absolutely lovely. Don't kill a great story! <3 (That, and I have a morbid fascination/love for Crazy!Sasuke and Crazy!Naruto. Utter smex.)

iiiiiiiiiihh!!! *huge silly grin on face* this is so cool!! I _love_ this fic! ^^ this is like the fic I would write myself if I could write worth a damn. ^^;; am so glad that you are. writing it, I mean. I have been reading all kinds of ficlets, hoping that they would even have an ounce of some of the plot I had in my head, and here I find a fic that has all f it XD and more! imagine my happiness ^^
and it's well-written to boot! great written in fact. I <3 your writing style. so much much much better than most of the crappy look-at-me-I'm-8-years-old-and-I-can-spell fiut tut there. >.< how I have longed for some writing skills.... *sigh* anyways, pleasepleasepleasepleaseplease don't quit this fic!! ;_;

I think I might have reviewed this already, but just in case I want to say that I really like this fic and personally to me..the first two chapters are lovely, beautiful detail and the images that the words conjure is something I'm feeling envy over right now being a writer myself. I *really* like this fic and will be really grieved if you do discontinue it without finishing.. Hopefully you will get more good reviews and keep at it ^-^

its areally good story i would of reviewd but this is the first time i read this story so plz plz plz plz keep updating PLZ

noooo~~ don't even think of quitting!! this story is quickly climbing it's way on top if my favourite stories! you can't quit now.. ;_; seriously, I love this stiry! and I adored your writing style in the frist chapters. *grumles at the people who said it was to hard* learn english, people. it's not that hard. T_T
anyway, please, please, please don't quit this story.... *luffs it* <3