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I've been meaning to Review this, so forgive me for the delay. I'm really hoping you don't discontinue this fic. I'm enjoying it immensely, and I -like- the writing style, and never once found it confusing. It's been a wonderful read for me, and that's saying a lot because I am not in the habit of reading anything yaoi related. I'm not sure -why- I clicked on it, but I'm really thankful that I had. To sum it up in a few words: This has been one of the best fics I've ever read. Outside of the typical grammar/spelling thing, the plot is remarkably captivating, and actually believable in regards to the progression of the canon storyline. I think that's what's really got me hooked. I started reading this a couple of days ago, and I've been returning here faithfully every day to check for new chapters. It's completely understandable if the fic's discontinued, but I'd really love to see this play out to it's conclusion.

And I do have to say, the sadist in me is loving what you've done to my favorite Naruto couple (Shikamaru/Ino) >D Keep up the good work, and even though I've said it before, in so many words, this fic is absolutely fantastic.

Everything makes so much more sense with that fourth chapter. ^_^; Are they going to blame Ino for Shika's death? o_o

Absolutely a wonderful chapter. The pace of the plot is picking up. I love this story so much, you absolutely must keep writing it.

I'm really confused as to whs has happening. I mean, I can understand Shakespeare, but this just makes me go, 'huh?'. From my understanding, Naruto and Sasuke are a couple, but everyone is scared/pissed off/pitying at them. They barely come out into the public. They haven't gone on missions or anything in 10 years. Am I right? o.o;

Oh my god. This is an absolutely amazing story. I can't voice that well enough, I really can't. It reads beautifully, the feelings of everyone woven intricately into the plot, the explinations of WHY are absolutely flawless. Gha. Definitely one of the best stories I've read in a while.

-Rose

I hope you continue this, I liked it and you have got my attention snared quite nicely ^^ I do so enjoy darkfics..