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for Remorse

by Iori

person Kodoku
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aa, I really liked this. the characterizations were great too. was this meant to be a one shot? or is there a possibility for more? or more like it? the pairing was good too.
person Callisto
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0.o very weird, but very good! YAY the first Itachi/naruto story ( or so i think ^_^ ) Itachi is SO cool :D
please write more, i wanna know what happens... pwease :) * big chibi eyes *
person ranoshi_ai
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should definitely continue this! i usually prefer narusasu/sasunaru fiction, but in this particular story, i really like how itachi and naruto are together because itachi loves him so in this case, i say that sasuke can somewhere along the lines of go to hell because of his callousness towards naruto. i love naruto, poor kid;-; though i do share the same question of what if the kyuubi wasn't there? would itachi still choose naruto for some uunknown reason? i like the effect of how naruto speaks in third person and the switching personalities is something special and way cool that i don't remember encountering in any of the naruto fictions i've read. so all in all, great fic, cool writing, and thanks^^
person Kia
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUUUUUUUDE... I didn't realize that you wrote this until the very end when you said 'go read my story Marked by Justu'. Dude, please, I'm begging you to update. PLEASE. This is just so interesting, and I WANNA READ MORE. Nicely done. Crazy Naruto; I like the idea!!
person Twilight Rose
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GAH... O_O; *Glomps fic* I love it to peices... though I can't place why. It must be my fangirlisms for Itachi...
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was pretty good! I like! The only thing is it kind of put me on edge, with the straight jacket. Lets just say I went a little nutty a few times before and I was never put in a straight jacket, only drugged. Eheh I don't think I should be admitting this online but... oh well! Good story anyways! I hope Sasuke knows how crazy Naru goes over him...
person RikuNghts (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! It was very well written. I liked it alot. Great job on Naruto's... insanity and Itachi's attitude. Keep up the great work! ^_^ Not much else to say...