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O. M. F. G. I think that may well have been the most depressing thing i've ever read, and i am a total angst whore most days. gah eveybody is so real, and horribly contorted, with Sasuke being all emotionaly impotent, and naruto letting him do anything he damn well pleases, and itachi raping MORE people, and kakashi getting jealous of naruto even when the boy is barely even hanging on to the edge of sanity, and iruka just gripping onto everything around him, trying to fix himself and AH >.< definitly emotionaly intense and long, it sucks you in and i swear i couldn't even breathe until i was done. that must have been a bitch to write, but i do hope we get more. i kinda want someone to kick sasuke's ass, but at the same time, he's broken enough that he might not make it through that, and as much as my main hobby lately is making sasuke cry ... i don't even know. i need a nap now *luffs*

Are you going to update soon? :) i'd like to read more :)

Hi! When are you going to update this? :) there's going to be more chapters, right? i really want to read more :)

I am going to cry. Oh, I am so going to cry. Screw the homework. You made it, you submitted the next chapter. I have to read this _now_. And I officially love you. A lot.

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wow everythign is just so wow ur stroy's awesome! they're in character and evrtyhing though the itachi thing was just so aahh!! i just wanted to kill that bastard! but seriosly ur story is really really good so please update soon

Ne, I love you. -giggles- Kakashi is my favorite chara and since you have him doing Iruka its even better. Almost all of my favorite pairings are here!! -squeels in an embraessingly fangirlish manner- All you would need to do is shove Gaara and Lee in there somehow and it would be perfect!!

I really like this story, but I've only managed to get about half of chapter two. I think AFF has messed things up in your fic. I've gotten used to letters being replaced/missing as that's in every fic hosted at AFF, but there seems to be a largeg ap in your fic.

What a contradiction. He loved it, listened to the hum of machinery above their heads as if lowered them. “Okay. Thanks, Kakashi-sensei,” Naruto tried to it it sound like a goodbye.

Please go through your story and fix all of AFF's errors. i for once can't continue to read this fic if there's indeed a part missing, which is a shame because it's really good.

I'm speechless. In my wildest dreams I couldn't even imagine such a wonderful story. The way you described the day when Itachi killed his family is marvelous. I couldn't stop reading, I felt actually moved by your words. You are an amazing author, because, you see, there are not many fanfiction writers who can write a scene without extra unnecessary pathos. There are only a few authors who can make it real, who can make the readers see and feel what was actually happening. Every word, every motion - everything is appropriate. And nothing leaves you thinking something like "why did the author type this shit anyway?” Really, amazing. The spider story in the first chapter is great as well. I love the way you keep telling how Sasuke thinks about the week points of the spider and his weapons and I love the way you describe every character. Naruto as he really is. Sakura as she is. And Sasuke. And Kakashi with Iruka, though I don't really like that pairing. The characterization is absolutely stunning. Also, I love the way you describe how Naruto and Sasuke have sex - so sensual, without pathos or extra fluff... it's just the way it's supposed to be. I can't even think for a reason to question it. I can't even think for a reason why I should think about how real it was. Because it's so real it makes me blush. I love Naruto/Sasuke and Itachi/Sasuke fics a lot. And you combined those pairings in such an incredible way... really, I admire you. I want to hug you and kiss you and have kids with you. XD Geez, I even love your disclaimers. I even wrote this huge incoherent review to tell you how much you rock. You're great, thank you so much for this beautiful fanfic.
Uh, and I want to ask you... uh, will you continue the story? Please continue. Please, please, please. *loop = infinity* I know it's annoying to have someone who begs you to do something you don't really want (in case you really don't want to ^^'), but please have some mercy on me. I think this story is the best Naruto fic I've ever read. So please continue to write.

Flawless in every single way. Wow and amazing...I can't wait for your next story to come out! I read all the ones you have! ^_^ WOW~