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I definitely agree that Itachi is best when he is being a psycho bastard- a seriously badass, scare-the-living-shit-out-of-everyone-he-meets, totally calm and composed... that scene with Kabuto and Orochimaru was so hilariously funny! It's so much fun when bad guys are abusing each other, because it's totally in character AND they deserve it! And you wrote it SO WELL. The motif of Orochimaru getting his ass kicked- well, fucked- was beautifully enhanced by Kabuto's watching and being scared shitless by Itachi's total badassness.

wow this was such a great story! I loved the kakashixsasuke part ^^
ANd I also love a sasuke finally shows his true self to naruto and kakashi.
Please hurry with the next chapter for I can't wait to see where this is going!

thanks for finally updating! this chapter was so great! It seems like Sasuke and Naruto's relationship is really starting to become serious, like they're becoming more loving towards one another. It's nice! ^_^ Keep up the awesome work! I can't wait for your next update.

Ummm... Chapter 3 is kinda... cut off. I read this fic a while ago, when it was only 3 chapters long, and I remember it ending with the best KakaSasu scene I've ever read... instead, it ends with "She only wanted Sasuke to do that, but he was too busy looking forward, not at"

PLEASE FIX!!!

I'll just say this... Iie Nome could have done a better job editing, there were several words either really screwed up or incoherent in annoying places throughout the story. It's not like I don't enjoy a challenge reading the context and guessing what would fit but really, is it necessary?

Alright! Goooo Itachi!!
Don't mind me, I'm just happy that Itachi made an appearance (and what an appearance it was ;)
But now I just wish that the KabuOro had continued... is there any chance that you'll be inspired enough to write a little more smut for those two?

I finished reading this story almost a week ago (I swear these are THE LONGEST chapters EVER, but I like that), and I just wanted to thank you for writing it! This is my faaavorite Naruto fic! I just love your writing style, and how true you are to the characters! It's so good, I can't help but gush about it. I absolutely cannot wait for the next chaptthouthough I can only imagine how long it must take for you to write(considering how long it takes me to read) O__O! I'm actually thinking of watching Initial D just so I can read your fic of it XD

Just keep writing... Hope to see the next chapter soon!! ^o^

Yay~! You wrote more X3 *Dance dance dance*~!

this fic is a lot better than the summary leads on >_>;;;

your chapters are really really long and intimidating...like chapter 1 can be broken into at least two/three chapters...
sometimes, long chapters scare me (cause there's so much to read..)

oh yeah...i don't think your fic is a pwp...there's not enough lemons for your fic to be classified as a pwp (according to me..) =P plus, your fic has a good plot in itself (sasuke recovering from what itachi did to him) ^_^

hm...i do think the summary can be improved by removing all those warnings (except for yaoi and lemon) and place those warnings within their respective chapters or list them in the first chapter..and list only the main pairings (narusasu, kakairu) and take out the minor pairings...cause it made me think that sasuke would like naruto, kakashi and itachi (which is definitely not the case) ...oh yeah..make up a real summary! i actually read those things -___- (maybe the rest of the population doesn't...but i do -___-;;) hm..maybe something talking about a tramatized sasuke...and how he tries to overcome his fear...how he's not everythign that he leads people to believe.

you have a wonderful story here and i just wish for more peopel to read your fic ^_^

thank you for writing!~

kayoko

XD Gah, I luffitt. *tickles joo*.