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Hey, very good beginning... About that monster; Is it real or just something tsunade & co had made up to test them? I mean when you think of Kakashi's last comment you kinda' wonder. Meaning they can't use any light 'cause if they did they'd see that it wasn't really a monster but just a ninja doing very good Gen-justu.

And oh... I know I'm being picky but you have a few wrong spelling and other lesser faults which bothered me a bit... Think about that when you post the next chapter. A flawless story is generally more enjoyed... (but it's the plot that matters)

I really like the idea, I hope you update soon.^^

You've caught my interest with the plot. I'm curious to see what you have living in the cave.

cdk

pls continue, its very good... way better than my story, o well V_V (too lazy to login)

Yay!!!! Please hurry and update!

Look Sasuke know's Naruto's FUCKING name you ignorant little moron, and stop using the Fangirl Japanese, and please just take this fic down until you make it STOP SUCKING.

Well interesting...not bad....now constructive criticism...there are a few things that needed editing, probably proof-reading will help that. I think the chapter stopped in sort of an odd place, not quite a cliff hanger, but not quite and end, it was kind of abrupt, but oh well. I will look for the next chapter as soon as it's posted. Good luck.

interesting
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