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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it was a perfect ending for the story, coming full circle. The ending put a smile on my face and through the whole chapter it really did feel like everything was winding down. I haven't reviewed before (^_^;) but I have definitely enjoyed reading you're story, the good bits, the bad bits (the bad bits being anything that involved Orochimaru) and the heartbreaking. I hope to see more from you! One shots, wips - anything!
Great job!
Great job!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:Hugs screen:
I LOVE YOU STORY!
Wow I I really am lost for words ...
All I have is wow ... I love ths story so much. wow
I.... oh my gwad really this has never happend before. THe story was amazing. I love it!
wow
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I LOVE YOU STORY!
Wow I I really am lost for words ...
All I have is wow ... I love ths story so much. wow
I.... oh my gwad really this has never happend before. THe story was amazing. I love it!
wow
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay...but now we need some conflict. Either with Sasuke's parents or Naruto's aunt...don't care which. That...or some smokin hot yaoi action!!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
waa!! can't belive it's finally over!! this fic is simply awesome. i love it so much. So much intensity, passion, and angst, with a bit of humor and fluff thrown in it made it an extremely enjoyable read. i'm sure to re-read the entire fic again in the future (when I have lotsa time since it is pretty long!). Thanks so much for writing and sharing such a wonderful piece. i'm so lucky i decided to read this fic!!!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CRYYYYYY I'm crying uwahhhh~ ahhh that one sentence by Sasuke when he said that he was waiting to hear it from Naruto ... oh my goodness... i was teary!!! I wanted to scream so many times but my parents in the next room would freak out :( uwahhhhhhhh~ YOU HAVE TO WRITE A ONE-SHOT OR TWO lol or a sequel..gahhh so pretty...so fuckin pretty...I love it! *sighs contentedly* uwahhhh~ I can't believe you ended it though! It could've gone on forever (as I wanted it to!) but but but...you ended it there *cries* uwahhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! gahhh!!! this chapter totally had a sense of finality though...with all the winding up going on haha...loved the solemness in the beginning. I'm glad that Ran has come to accept Naruto, even though his aunt and uncle may have not...that's too bad though. Loved how you gave Tsunade and Jiraiya more of a role in his life now...that's just beautiful to me. I hated the Neji moment lol jk :P I agree with Sasuke's possessiveness - and as much as I hate Sasuke - Naruto only belongs to him (and me, of course!). The "Oro-bastard" scene still makes me stutter. I took a break to grab a drink from the kitchen while reading, and that ugh...utter horror of a scene where Sasuke was being a big ass...and fuckin cheated on Naruto...gahhhh *SHUDDER!!!!!!* UGHHHH Get it out of my mind....gahhhh but Naruto's loving...and wow, I mean, this is the one fic where I just LOOOOVE Sasuke's emotions though. I mean, wow! That's what being in love must be like...like how their breath stilled just by smelling each other's scents on pillows or something...or just a smile made Sasuke choke (in the previous chap with the tie). That's just beautiful. This fic is beautiful. Everything is beautiful about it (EXCEPT the Oro-scene...gahhhhh make me forget ittttt!!!!!!). Too bad about Sasuke's parents though :( But I guess not everything can be fixed, eh. Love Love Love. I better stop here before you freak out on me.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Ch. 32-End)
I'm sorry for this fanfiction to end, but you're right; it has come to a pleasent place where you should end it.
I'm honored to have had the oppertunity to read this fanfiction. And I'm looking forward to read more from you; wether it be a one-shot to this story, and a brandnew series; I want to read more from you. ^_^
Best of wishes,
Nora Shu [former Hitomi].
Ja ne~
I'm sorry for this fanfiction to end, but you're right; it has come to a pleasent place where you should end it.
I'm honored to have had the oppertunity to read this fanfiction. And I'm looking forward to read more from you; wether it be a one-shot to this story, and a brandnew series; I want to read more from you. ^_^
Best of wishes,
Nora Shu [former Hitomi].
Ja ne~
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG it's done!!!!!!! hurray for SasuNaru!!! yep, i am eagerly awaiting all your other fics!! keep up the good work!!! ^_______________^
*huggles you until you're blue*
LOL
>> SD-chan <<
*huggles you until you're blue*
LOL
>> SD-chan <<
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And ... sorry for my very ill review -_-; that's my of "loving." By being totally random and just saying everything that comes to mind about your beautiful beautiful beautiful fic. :)
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm... just so... sad..!
Sheesh, how did you make everything about this story so great?! Like you said, it was... great (-_-") seeing Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship grow and blossom. (I've always wanted to describe a relationship as "blossoming." Always.) Especially without all the ninja-ness, their characters were able to be totally different from the canon without making you seem too "I want NaruSas in bed NOW!" Haha, even if it was like that though... ^_^
PS: I'm glad Naruto got to be happy in the end! And the way Itachi's gig was closed up was pretty cool too!
PSS: Uh, what about Sasuke's mom?
PSSS: It Neji GAY?!?!
Sheesh, how did you make everything about this story so great?! Like you said, it was... great (-_-") seeing Naruto's and Sasuke's relationship grow and blossom. (I've always wanted to describe a relationship as "blossoming." Always.) Especially without all the ninja-ness, their characters were able to be totally different from the canon without making you seem too "I want NaruSas in bed NOW!" Haha, even if it was like that though... ^_^
PS: I'm glad Naruto got to be happy in the end! And the way Itachi's gig was closed up was pretty cool too!
PSS: Uh, what about Sasuke's mom?
PSSS: It Neji GAY?!?!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey
it's sad, I think I never reviewed this, however, I've been reading it since 3rd chapter was posted XP
this is one of the best Naruto fics I've read, so it's a pitty it's over, but it may be better this way, so it doens't wear off and goes like turkey after christmas XP
i'll read this chapter now and review it later
i'll be looking for future fics by you, because baby, you've got it XP
it's sad, I think I never reviewed this, however, I've been reading it since 3rd chapter was posted XP
this is one of the best Naruto fics I've read, so it's a pitty it's over, but it may be better this way, so it doens't wear off and goes like turkey after christmas XP
i'll read this chapter now and review it later
i'll be looking for future fics by you, because baby, you've got it XP