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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh, I have to admit, it was a good ending! I'm going to have to re-read this story from time to time just to 're-live' it... It truly is a great story. ^-^ I just wanted to drop a review telling you that this was a great story... a great read, with lots of mouth-watering scenes! My favorite part had to be when Sakura and Ino happened upon Sasuke and Naruto making out in the alley... they were right, that would have been a much better way to find out. Enough babbling, anyways. Thank you for writing such an awesome fic! I'm sure generations of Sasu/Naru fangirls will read and enjoy it. ^-^
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could have gone on, I think you are right in that, but then you risk losing part of the stories mystique. What better way to end a story then with the way it began, with a few twists. This is truly one of the best Naruto fanfiction stories I have read. The relationship was well developed, it brought in various elements, and just seemed believable. The descriptions were great, and you took time to develope and actual plot, something interesting and worth reading. I look forward to any new fics you make. Goodluck, Ciao!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God....I thought this would go on forever....but it ended....felt kinda....sudden really....dunno why....I liked it...It was one of the first stories that I read here on adult ff actually...oh well, I still want you to continue it...but it's perfect the way it is....
Don't worry, I will be looking forward to your future fanfics!
Hugs n'love
~Germaine~
Don't worry, I will be looking forward to your future fanfics!
Hugs n'love
~Germaine~
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't think I've reviewed this story before but I've followed it since the beginning and I'd just started looking for sasunaru in fics. It has been a joy to read this and to watch you grow as a writer. From stilted dialogue to vague but meaningful declarations, it's been a very eventful and prosperous journey. I can't wait for your next fic. Good luck in all you do.
May your muses always be with you,
Moeko
May your muses always be with you,
Moeko
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Naaaa, I hate writing reviews. I try to avoid it normally - but I just HAVE to write you something.
Maybe it's the fact that this fic is now finished, or maybe it's just the talent that's made me green to the gills I don't have - whatever it is, I feel compelled. I've always wanted to feel compelled to do something other than pull on the shoestrings of unsuspecting little brothers, it's nice!
ANYWHOO!
Awesome fic. Loved every bit of it. I got sad when Naruto was sad, angry when Sasuke was a bitch and laughed when Sakura and Ino got their little sideshow. In other words, awesomelycoolfantastic. I hope to be further inspired by your writing in the future. Keep up the fantabulous talent!! ^_^
Thanks for the fantabulous read,
Jinniku. <3
Maybe it's the fact that this fic is now finished, or maybe it's just the talent that's made me green to the gills I don't have - whatever it is, I feel compelled. I've always wanted to feel compelled to do something other than pull on the shoestrings of unsuspecting little brothers, it's nice!
ANYWHOO!
Awesome fic. Loved every bit of it. I got sad when Naruto was sad, angry when Sasuke was a bitch and laughed when Sakura and Ino got their little sideshow. In other words, awesomelycoolfantastic. I hope to be further inspired by your writing in the future. Keep up the fantabulous talent!! ^_^
Thanks for the fantabulous read,
Jinniku. <3
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry the long and winding journey has come to an end. It was certainly one hell of a trip and I had alot of fun. Thank you.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tweet!!! =D SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDD!!!! My tears that made me end up with headaches because of this story is worth it!! I can't wait for your furture storys!! Just no charater deaths please. xD
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this story was going to end soon, but not this soon. I'm sad to see it go.
However, I liked how you ended this. All of the major problems were resolved, and there seems to be an equilibrium in Naruto and Sasuke's world.
I'm definitely looking forward to your future work. Please post it soon!
However, I liked how you ended this. All of the major problems were resolved, and there seems to be an equilibrium in Naruto and Sasuke's world.
I'm definitely looking forward to your future work. Please post it soon!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful story - I love it! It's funny and sweet, but sad at the same time. ^_^ Basically, there's a lot of emotion in this; and thank god, it isn't the annoying kind. This is definitely a favorite of mine! Update soon!
~Lanti~
~Lanti~
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn, been awhile since i've been able to read, and, yay!! had a chapter here waiting for me!! *does happy dance* this was such a sweet/steamy chapter, naru and sasu seem to be getting even closer... now will they start to be more open with each other about things? i hope so.... and lotsa lemony goodness to make up for all their time apart ^_______^ veeery niiice!!!! and in itachi's car!! omgoddess, was he there the WHOLE TIME?????? hmmm.... i wonder what's really going on with itachi anyway? what are his intentions? what the hell's he doing? and what's orochimaru gonna do now that sasuke didn't go to the school??? ai yi yi, still so much that you could be planning, i can't wait for more!!! anyway, awesome chapter as always, hope you update again soon! it's been over a month *cries* :p ja, lg